Reviews for Getting It Right
TheAbsolutistsCreed chapter 16 . 11/12/2012
Magnificent, this is actually a story. I can actually get a sense of realism from this, the characterization is well thought through, the sense of feeling from it is raw and powerful, and the events aren't just followed along, you're purposefully making it AU and working with that knowledge rather than try to adhere to canon events and pass it off as AU by doing something slightly different.

The only thing I would suggest working on is your sense of scenery, we might all know the sights, but it's your show. Make the scenery mean something, it isn't just there to be reminiscing with.
Crazed King chapter 6 . 11/4/2012
Nice story!
I like the plot!
What about old man who lives in the sword? He can talk too ya know...
S0phi3F4wn chapter 16 . 11/1/2012
Toki Mirage chapter 16 . 10/24/2012
Love this thing. I'm so glad you didn't copy everything from the manga. Soooo glad. I HATE rereading the entire manga in a story. Drives me nuts.

You sure know how to Angst the Ichigo. Daaymn. I mean, he angsts in such a unique, /Ichigo way/, and you just nailed it.

And lastly... please update?
Leo-Novum chapter 16 . 10/21/2012
Please update! This is first rate. I hope you do since this site is so full of Mary Sue. Most people write only half as good as they actually really should. Now that this message is all solved and some, when can I expect the update to come?
Tellemicus Sundance chapter 4 . 10/13/2012
Are you guys even still alive anymore? It's been TOO LONG since you've updated!
Guest chapter 16 . 10/5/2012
It's almost a year without updates. I still love this story.
SnakethZero chapter 1 . 10/4/2012
I really hope you give us some kind of update or something soon this is hands down one of the best bleach fics i've read. You could go more into the zanpaktous relationship to try and jumpstart your inspiration again. I think you guys are doing awesome so far so keep it up. But please PLEASE update somthing soon lol even if its just as simple as a post to let us know your not giving up on this.
Ixde chapter 16 . 9/30/2012
I know this hasn't been updated in quite a while, but i honestly like it too much not to leave a reviw. An awesome job, and fervently hope to see more of this story if you'll ever decide to continue it. Good job!
Dark Signer chapter 16 . 9/16/2012
Damn, just when it was getting good. I really have to give you some serious credit. This is probably the best Bleach fanfic I've read. The only one that comes close is Hogyoku ex Machina. The fact that I'm comparing your story to that masterpiece really should send a message don't you think.

Honestly, I'm kind of dissapointed that you haven't updated for so long. However I really shouldn't be, since I haven't updated any of my stories for a while either. Writer's block is a true bane of existence.

I love this story. I love all of the changes you've made. I love all the hinting of a much bigger story. I love the way you've written the characters. I love the situations they get in. I love the emotional moments, those are built up beautifully. I really cannot wait for an update. I really hope you can find your muse. I wish you much luck.

Dark Signer
Guest chapter 2 . 9/2/2012
what the hell!? orhime is the CHIC ICHIGO!
Guest chapter 16 . 8/31/2012
don't give up on this story you guys!
Qwerty321 chapter 16 . 8/26/2012
I love this story. It looks like it hasn't been updated in a while, but I'm really hoping it hasn't been abandoned.
guest chapter 16 . 8/22/2012
Please update. This is just a suggestion but please don't give Orihime hollow powers. Why? She dosen't have the aggression that's needed to keep an inner hollow in check that's how I see it anyway.
cybresamurai chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
I also wish to protect Don Kanoji! :)
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