Reviews for Getting It Right |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Ughh i can believe its a ichigo x inoue pairing |
![]() ![]() ![]() ohmygod! Masaki cracks me up! I'm so happy with how you're writing her. I am loving your story :D |
![]() ![]() Please continue this fanfic |
![]() ![]() Im kind of interested what will happen next orihime gonna have similiar training when ichigo recovered his shinigami powers or will it be something different?is orihime going to have an inner hollow as well im also interested on what will happen in soul society because i think in the end ichigo will kill aizen because his shikai almost killed him and if he uses if bankai his power would be kinda rival his fullbring if ichigo kills aizen what about the arrancars what are you goona do about them they need a ruler in hueco things is orihime going to have her own combat pass and could you add more ichi/hime moments |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Oh this fic was so good." |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, one of my favorite time travel fics. Unique too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() In all honesty, while this is good, it just seems too Orihime focused. Which isn't necessarily bad, but other then this chapter there hasn't really been any reason at all for Ichigo to be from another dimension. He's just let her do her own thing, aside from occasionally helping her out. He could've been training her, or gone off to thin herds of hollows, or something. Instead he's just fallen into being a side character that's more powerful then the main character. Anyway, while I'm a bit frustrated by how you're handling the characters development, it has been an enjoyable story. It's well paced(most would just jump straight to the soul society arc) and I am interested in how you're going to handle the next arc. Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() beautiful fic everything is realistic he troubled teen who on verge of suicide because he lost everyone and the hollow who his job suppose to making him mad was the reason he still sane fantastic fic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You bastard! You almost made me cry in the prologue, and i dont even ship Urahara with Yoruichi! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story, even if it's dead. |
![]() ![]() ![]() well at least urahara isn't going to follow aizen's script this time |
![]() ![]() ![]() so orihime is going to be a Shinigami in this fic now and not ...um...they never really said what she was in canon since she didn't really fight into any of the categories of power explained thus far |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a great story. I really enjoyed it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ichigo's whole 'I will kill Aizen' thing is going to make the fake-Aizen-death a bit more difficult to handle, isn't it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() If this were a crack fic, I'd say that Urahara has placed some sort of 'Curse of Fangirls' on him. Possibly for Yoruichi's amusement. |