Reviews for Alpha
PastOneonta chapter 2 . 9/11/2013
Fantastic, I have not read a story that addresses the topic of the 2 packs after Reneesmee is born. This was really interesting. I love that Jacob is the biggest and kept his friends. Sam can see the difference between the Packs, Jacobs consists of his friends by choice while Sam's followers were those that phased first. Jacob's seat of the old chair becoming the throne with the Alpha male and female was really good. This was good, I will look at more of your stories.
BlackImprint chapter 2 . 9/22/2012
This was so well done! It was just like seeing two sides of the same coin. You captured the characters so perfectly. Loved it! I wish there was more!
Black's Wolfgirl22 chapter 2 . 6/22/2012
Man, Jake's pack is awesome, lol.
Team-WOLFPACK chapter 2 . 6/5/2012
This seems like only the beginning - I wish there were a third chapter where they actually do the meeting. But even so, that was great!
IBTeri chapter 2 . 3/19/2012
this is so funny
Tara Maria chapter 2 . 6/22/2011
Really loved this two-shot.
kosi71819 chapter 2 . 5/16/2011
luved dis fic
rach 'na lasair chapter 2 . 4/27/2011
'He may have imprinted but he wasn't dead'

hahahahaha. My favourite line. I love Sams POV; he's so intense That i can't help but forget I hate him for the whole Leah thing. Jake is Jake; pretty much perfect :D

I liked the concept behind this. Great writing. And perfect characterization as alwayss.
ShebaBaby chapter 2 . 2/3/2011
Ohhhhhh, the structure of this story is GENIUS! Almost like seeing two sides of the same coin. Having a good time imagining what happened next!
Ray chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
You truly are amazing.
Anonymous chapter 2 . 12/16/2010
Excellent characterization, again. One of the best Blackwater writers I've seen so far!
queenfemme chapter 2 . 11/4/2010
Loved because I find Leah one of the few charecters I dont want to kill.
shadowcatbrat918 chapter 2 . 10/19/2010
Great story! I think I liked chapter 2 best (I'm biased because Jacob & his pack are my faves :D) but both chapters were awesome! :)
overzealousbunny chapter 2 . 10/19/2010
love how completely different Jake sees things. Sam watches everything and Jake is concerned about his stomach and keeping his family together. Gorgeous!
Jacobleah chapter 2 . 10/18/2010
Loved it! I hope you write something Pack related again soon. Maybe a follow up to She Hates Me :)

As usual, you worked your magic with the different Point of Views- I guess it's all perception in most cases. In Part 1, Sam went from feeling Jake was an immature,

untested kid who would be easy to coerce back into the Pack to seeing him in a different light once his Pack entered the room. Suddenly, Jake is transformed into a physically large, confident, regal leader just waiting for Sam to hand him both packs.

In this follow up, we see that Jake is a bit as Sam perceives - not ready, in some ways unsure and still a bit of a kid. Once his best friends enter, his confidence goes up as well as his comfort level. When the Clearwaters enter, it becomes a whole new game as Leah

easily shakes Sam's confidence just by her presence and by choosing Jake. What is normal Jake-Leah banter is seen as some form of secret communication between the children of the Elders by Sam. All the sudden, Sam's whole outlook changes.

It is interesting that Jake never views Sam as a threat though. Jake is always confident in himself and in his friends.
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