|Reviews for Pokemon: The Kanto League!|
| DreamingMelodies chapter 4 . 1/1/2011
iiWishes-Chann ! Update this will you ? You have readers waiting !
| RoyalDragoness17 chapter 5 . 12/18/2010
Cool chapter and Ray was in it I really hope you can update soon.
| Emo Princess Addie chapter 5 . 12/15/2010
Great job! I feel sorry for Vance...well only a little ;D! Anyways, I forget if I sent in an OC or not. If I did...can she meet them some time in this story or maybe hang out wit them a little while? Even her being in one chapter would be great!
Thank ya Wishes!,
| DreamingMelodies chapter 5 . 12/13/2010
Aiyah. Wishes-chii, do u like watiching Vance suffer?
| Flashfire360 chapter 1 . 12/13/2010
Hey, this story is cool, and WWWAAAYYY better than mine. you can use an OC of mine (You will find 4 different characters on my profile, feel free do do what you want with them.) Keep it up!
| I Have Finally Moved chapter 4 . 11/18/2010
omg, i love how you wrote this chapter! lol, of course i do, my occ's in it... _;;
| I Have Finally Moved chapter 3 . 11/1/2010
can't wait to read more [for obvious reasons, lol]!
| DreamingMelodies chapter 2 . 10/23/2010
I kinda pity Vance's head. Not the actual person. The head. It's always being injured by Sora. XDD
and I'd like to change celeste's team a little. kay? nothing else is changing, just the team a bit.
Eevee - To evolve into either espeon or umbreon, your choice. Hatched from an egg
Shiny Ninetales - Attention Seeker Beauty Queen Diva. Hatched from egg
Froslass - Obtained from friend in Sinnoh
Dratini / Dragonair - Whichever one is your choice. Recieved from friend.
Kepp writing. I need more chapters...
| UnholyAntic chapter 1 . 10/21/2010
Name: Kenn Kurotsugu
How old your chara is: 17
Brief description of your chara: About five foot ten inches he is of relative average fight, maybe even on the short side. His body is a lean build, not necessarily muscular or cut, but one that shows he walks everywhere. He has short and messy blond hair that looks as though it were modeled after a Zapdos due to the spikiness and black streaks. Kenn's eyes are a green that is remnant of a Scyther's skin. He is typically wearing a pair of black slim legged jeans, that bore signs of intense tattering due to the frequency the had been worn, for his upper torso he wears a black turtleneck and over it a long Dragonite orange overcoat.
Personality: Kenn's personality is not at all too complex, he is a fun loving kid, but serious when it comes right down to it. His temper can be a little short at times, so don't piss him off, he will hold a grudge.
Brief Biography: Born in Lavender Town, Kanto of Palmer, the tower tycoon, and his far less famous wife Jessica, Kenn had become interested in Pokemon from a young age. As a child he would often go to the gyms to watch the battles take place. It was no surprise to anyone that he became a Pokemon trainer the day he turned eleven. His first Pokemon, and Dratini named Atamisk, was given too him by his fathers long time friend Sigma Noku, a Pokemon professor who lived in the Sevii Islands on his ranch. He trained Atamisk with vigor and over the next few years managed to obtain his Dragonite. Now fifteen with a plethora of Pokemon and one as rare as a Dragonite he was a prime candidate to be a part of team rocket, at least team rocket thought so. Their efforts to recruit him were successful but short lived. Only a year went by before he left, having decided that what they were doing was wrong. He now continues his journey, helping Professor Noku with his research on ancient Pokemon. He has traveled all of the Kanto and Jhoto regions, most of Sinnoh, some of Hoenn and would like to soon visit Isshu after discovering a new fossil, he would like to animate as soon as possible. Currently Kenn has gone home to visit his mother in Lavender Town, and he soon plans to challenge the Indigo league's elite after he recieves his final two badges, The Earth badge and the Volcano badge.
Where would you like your character to appear in the story?: Around when you get your sixth or seventh badge, that way my upper ranked Pokemon wont be too out of place.
What would you like your character to be to the main characters?: A friend would be nice, even a rival. But I don't think Kenn fits the bill of an enemy at the moment, but perhaps in the future his Team Rocket affiliation could make him seem a bit enemy like.
Pokemon your character has:
Atamisk - Dragonite; His first and favorite pokemon given to him by Professor Sigma Noku.
Sylphide - Milotic; A gift from his Father for Kenn's defeat of the Orange League.
Samjaza - Abra; Captured shortly after returning to Kanto.
Spectre- Haunter; For some reason it seemed to latch to Kenn as a Ghastly when Kenn was a boy, after it found him upon his return to his home, Kenn decided to accept it to his team.
Other: Has bore witness to several "Legendary" or "Ancient" Pokemon to include; Zapdos, The Three Beasts, Ho-oh, Celebi, and Deoxys. Has not captured any to his disappointment
| Survivor Girl chapter 2 . 10/20/2010
Name: Alexandira "Alex" Moore
Brief description of your chara:(meaning what they wear, how they look, ect.). She is extremely short and skinny with messy shoulder length black hair with two skull hair pins keeping her hair out of her eyes. She also has purple eyes. She wears a purple sweater with a white skull on the front(the sweater is slightly too big), a lavender tutu, a pair of tight destroyed skinny jeans, and a pair of purple high top converse.
Personality: Though she may be gothic and has macabre interests, Alex is extremely outgoing. She loves to be the center of attention and is often doing or saying strange things. She says what's on her mind and is very blunt and strait forward, not sparing anyone's feeling. She has an ironic outlook on life and is extremely sarcastic.
Brief Biography: Alex's parents are incredibly rich, so Alex got her first pokemon at a very young age. Then she started traveling when she turned fifteen.
Where would you like your character to appear in the story?: Meh...whenever you need her to appear, preferably soon
What would you like your character to be to the main characters?: (friend/rival/enemy) Friend or rival or both
Pokemon your character has:
1) Vulpix named Ember(female)- acts almost exactly like Alex and often they'll will argue
2) Meowth name Violet(female) acts much more fickle and high classed than Alex
3) Totodile named Fang(male) hyper and energetic; very protective of Alex
4) Poochyena named Moon(female) easily angered and slightly mean. She is very affectionate to Alex though
Other: Just PM me if you need more info
| DreamingMelodies chapter 1 . 10/20/2010
Remember me? iTrufflez, or known on FFN as Sapphire Strawberrii. I wanna put an OC in. XD
Name: Celeste Whiterose
How old your chara is: Whatever age Sora is. Let's just say 16
Brief description of your chara: Seriously long blue hair tied into two high ponytails which flow to her waist, Light blue eyes, Always seem in an Grey Tanktop and has a white jacket covering it, a pair of her favourite grey jeans and ankle boots. To her, it's all about style AND comfortable lothing.
Personality: A normal girl in some ways. she loves teasing people for fun, Is really focused on her work. Trustworhy and honest. She's pretty cheerful and energetic. Occasionally calm and collected. has a temper and stubborn side. A good listenner, great with advice. Overall, your best friend.
Brief Biography: Her parents were a well-known co-ordinator and trainer. They've retired and become breeders. she often helps out at her home which has a wide fenced area for the pokemon. There's a mightyena that guards the house.
Where would you like your character to appear in the story?: Anywhere along the way, the closer, the better.
What would you like your character to be to the main characters?: Sora's buddy!~ Okay, Vance too, But Sora still.
Pokemon your character has:
Eevee - To evolve into either espeon or umbreon, your choice
Ninetales - Attention Seeker Beauty Queen Diva.
and Pikachu - Father's pokemon. A mature pokemon, watches over people.
Other: She will occasionally ignore you on purpose if she's not in a mood to talk.
meow. If you don't use it, no worries, need an image reference? for hair and such? Gaia. Miria's pic.
| RoyalDragoness17 chapter 1 . 10/20/2010
I really hope im not to late but here is my oc:)
How old your chara is:15
Brief description of your character:Brown Spiky Blue a black T-shirt with white pokeball symbol in the middle blue baggy jeans and a white backpack with a black pokeball in the black and white sneakers.
Personality:Is a cool funny guy who is in it to win it it is very rare to see him lose a battle but if he does lose he doesn't get mad he's just in it for the fun of it plus alot of girls like him alot but he is a bit dense to understand that.
Brief Biography:Born in litteroot town,but then moved to cerulean city at age 11 only has a mother since his father left them for some other girl and hates ghost type pokemon but loves electric type,And also has a brother who is currently in the sinnoh region.
Where would you like your character to appear in the story?:In the beginning would be cool.
What would you like your character to be to the main characters?:friend
Pokemon your character has:
-Mudkip-Was his starter pokemon and most loyal companion he is very friendly but not in a battle field.
-Shinx-was a gift from his brother,since his brother caught the shinx just for him also the Shinx is very serious and hates losing.
-Riolu-Was given as an egg by his brother he is very energetic and loves to battle.
hope you pick him:)
| Lucky Amulet chapter 2 . 10/20/2010
Wow, looks like the two have a lot ahead of them. Especially with Cole on their tails. Good thing both got to keep their pokemon. Hmmm I wonder who this mysterious stranger is. Oh well I'll find out in a couple days or so
| remixofdestiny chapter 2 . 10/20/2010
This is really good. Keep at it!
| remixofdestiny chapter 1 . 10/20/2010
Name: Sam Remixer
Personality: Kind, Caring, Tactful, Easygoing, and sometimes stubborn.
Appearence: Dark Brown hair that almost looks black, dark brown eyes, usually has a grin on his face, tan skin, wears a black t-shirt, wears a white short sleeve hoodie with black lightning spirals on it, blue jeans, and black tennis shoes. He also has a necklace that is a shape of a Yin-Yang sign.
Bio: He left his hometown of Twinleaf at the age of 10 for the need of adventure and the love of Pokemon. He got his first starter at the next town, which was Sandgem. He chose Turtwig as his starter and he left Sandgem to begin his adventure. It has been 4 years and he is currently traveling near Pallet.
Where would you like to be in the story: Um... The beginning will do.
I would like to be a friendly rival to Sora.
Pokemon: Turtwig (Terra) *refuses to evolve Male*
Pichu: (Erk) *Male*
Pidgeot: (Skye) *Male*
Staryu: (Serra) *Female*