|Reviews for Sun and Silk|
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/25/2013
I get this was supposed to be "sexy", but considering how hard ezio fought to make it STOP, this could be rape, since altiar continued to do it. If it was a roleplay that's one thing, but ezio wasn't pretending. So this is rape, or dubcon in the least, but really a rape.
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/21/2013
| Kira the cat chapter 1 . 5/2/2013
Wow...just wow. I've never played Assassin's Creed (my friend Dani mass spammed me wiki pages) so this was just my fangirlish curiosity getting the best of me but wow. I love how this flows its absolutely steamy and if it weren't for the fact that said friend hates yaoiI'd show her. I love that the "extracurricular activities" are a common enough occurrence that the neighbors know to go out as soon as it starts. I love your writing style and the way you wrote Ezio and Altaïr in perfect character (as far as I know). It sucks about the plagiarism and I hope the guy gets what he deserves. I hope you write more good stuff like this for other fandoms. Keep up the great work.
| EchoWolfie chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
Absolutely amazing... 3 I loved every second of it. And I enjoy your writing style a lot. Keep them coming! (Excuse the pun...)
| bavaria44 chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
I absolutely loved the ending, it was very beautiful. And the beginning, of course, I was laughing my ass out loud. The...ehm...scenes...well, those were something i did not anticipate. I mean...it does not go along with that tender ending very much. But that is just my opinion, feel free to ignore it ;o)
| eccentricweirdo chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
oh this was yummy! keep up the good work cant believe this has so few comments :)
| XxHannyaUchihaxX chapter 1 . 6/2/2012
Omg! Best thing ever! I loved it!
| Atramentous StygianIron chapter 1 . 12/10/2011
A very good story, please continue.
| 7-LunaAbraxos-7 chapter 1 . 11/1/2011
I really liked it :) Sorry to hear that it'd been copied and claimed as someone else's work. I've had one of my works plagiarised too, and it was picked up quickly by the network. There's no real way to prevent it, but the readers of your work will be interested in other stories of the same genre/pairing etc and read similar things. They're the ones that'll notice your work being copied. I think the person copying me had their profile deleted...
Again, great fic.
Love Luna xxx
| SlasherBunni chapter 1 . 9/16/2011
Wow I loved this story so much! :) it has enspired me to write my own AC fanfic 8D but not the same as yours o3o idk how it inspired me to write when I never write xD
| Matthew chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
I know this hardly counts as a review, but I just felt like I needed to say how much I loved this. It was erotic and sensual and kinky and abusive (for lack of a better word xD maybe rough) without being too much. Thank you for writing this amazing fanfiction! You're my hero! :D
| Hikaru'ttebayo chapter 1 . 1/25/2011
Omg that was SO hot!
I'm really one for angry and painful sex and you made it so incredibly hot. Your writing style is wonderful and your idea is just divine.
The only little thing I have to criticize is that I would have liked it more if you'd have described Ezio's pain more otherwise it's wonderful.
Thank you so much for writing one hell of a story and sharing it with us people.
Loves and hugs
| JuxtaposedAlbatross chapter 1 . 12/10/2010
I'm extremely surprised that this story has been up for almost two months and only has two reviews so far!
While your grammar could use some adjustments, the story was refreshing and flowed really well and your smut was superb. I love the sadistic side of Altair that you showed; I could actually see it befitting of his character.
Thanks for contributing to this fanfiction pairing with a greatly satisfying story! Faved. ;)
| Nicole Dollanganger chapter 1 . 11/23/2010
Omfg :D I loved it so much xD I love lemony stories~ like this kind :D make more chapters of this story T-T or I'll be sad :[ I really liked this ;) keep making mooree ~
| siberian74 chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
Wow, just the right kind of fic that I need for the weekend. Thank you for writing this, I love this pairing too much; a dominant-angry Altair x apologetic-charmer Ezio. I love how you wrote Altair in control, as he's the dominant of his bloodline. The smexy love scenes are well written, since these two are assassins, their love scenes are expected to be rough.
Yey, really a great read, how about a young 17 year Ezio for part 2 under Altair's tutelage? This fangirl will surely love it as well. Thanks and take care.