Reviews for An Engrossing Death
MoonyandProngs chapter 11 . 4/8/2011
Wow! That was really good! I liked it!
divyvicki chapter 11 . 3/9/2011
Didnt like this at all. Sorry I wasted my time reading
divyvicki chapter 5 . 3/9/2011
This is really confusing and not really to my taste, but I'm going to perservere and see what happens in the end.
Pippitwerd chapter 11 . 1/13/2011
And then we get to this final falling, I'm not sure how feel about her jumping, because it's not something that your supposed to do is it? take it upon yourself to finish things off but at the same term I am a firm believer in life is yours to do with it as you wish, Does it make it insulting to those like Jake and Edward that didn't have a choice? I love it for making me think hard and making me care, I love the tragic setting of death and self destruction, Does that make me sick? I think I am glad she took it upon herself to jump rather than waste and destroy herself I am sad that she didn't feel strong enough to pull herself away and empower her misfortune. but still from the moment she said the only way to die on Aro's table is for her to jump from somewhere very high I was rooting for her to do it, and so I am back to the same question again does that make me wierd sick a little off lol I can't wait to read more of your witing Bou, much love Lisa L x
Pippitwerd chapter 10 . 1/13/2011
I like the cuming together of both her love and her realization all in the same place, it works so well and I actually did an out loud sigh that hubby thought was aimed at him just now, I just feel that is the right way. It is ment to show her lead her and then wake her in all ways possible, it also left me dragging hubby up the stairs hee hee to finish what the words started. Lisa L
Pippitwerd chapter 8 . 1/13/2011
Really strange for me to ever like a Jake chappie. But DUDE how can you not like this annoying twerp noises like Bella fella ha ha, I like this one the most because you learn more about what Bella was before the hardship of death taking it's toll, but only just, that split second of the two children one scowling the other with laughter in his eyes. it bleeps behind my eyes and tells me so much. more than the highs or the deaths, the stubburn streak youget small peaks at was always there, but so was the fierce love and need to protect her friend, and so gives you more thought, like was it the deaths and need to shut them out find blame upon yourself or situation were these things she went to that jumped from one drug to another to not value her self enough to value what she lost instead of morn it. Did she feel just a small amount of resentment to her mother for not bringng him back! and on I jump again Lisa L x
Pippitwerd chapter 4 . 1/13/2011
From the dramatic way she is drawn into the chapter not knowing at first if she wants it or not, then feeling it as she merges with the feelings of want and need, waking up without answeres that you know are there but maybe need to look again trying to slow the images down and bring them to the front of your mind is the need made more so by the fright that is going on in the back of her mind? Running away,... is she? to or from I love how this one jumps from one to another yet is still telling the same story, Am I making sense? I am just writing what it said to me as I read it, the pace the fell. I am going to jump now because I really like the one I am jumping too ok! and I have to get it out of my head before I loose it and yes I no even writing I talk to much I write what my head says without listening to what it's saying enough I am moving on . much love lisa XL
Pippitwerd chapter 3 . 1/13/2011
Ok I'm back sorry about the delay, duty calls dinner baths and bed for the kiddies. so here we go my thoughs whoop whoop Jaspers bong dong! the writing draws you in so fast, but instead of it rolling past like a movie from the 21st century, its like fast flash of a picture then it's gone and another in it's place just as quick. The pictures are vivid and bright but leave a darkness in it's wake seconds before your blinded by another I love it the slower pace of this one works as just as much of a treat to. onto the next one
Pippitwerd chapter 2 . 1/13/2011
Emmett loving, Magic tripping, WoW I will be reviewong the rest but hubby just got home with dinner so be back in a bit short clue I FRIGGIN LOVE IT!
Pippitwerd chapter 1 . 1/13/2011
Finaly I can read it start to finsish, I love the way you write and can't wait to get stuck in I will let you know what I think as I go I am one of those anoying people that read then go back and review because I am terrible at writing lol, much love thanx for sharing your storys Lisa Lx (holykowski)
WickedCurveBall74 chapter 11 . 11/23/2010
That was...that was...THAT was insanely amazing. You gave me a serious mind fuck and that, my friend is quite hard to do to me. ;-P Impressive to say the least. Well done!
WickedCurveBall74 chapter 10 . 11/23/2010
Do you have any idea how much I hate you right now? He's DEAD? What the fuck is that shit? Damn it, you're lucky I love you as much as I do, girl! Lol!
WickedCurveBall74 chapter 9 . 11/23/2010
Yeah, that's great and all, but something's wrong. It can't be that easy. Moving on!
WickedCurveBall74 chapter 8 . 11/23/2010
Damn, that was sad. Hope she realizes it wasn't her fault.
WickedCurveBall74 chapter 7 . 11/23/2010
Whoa! So, Jacob's dead because of her? She's the way she is because of him? Gah! I'm so confused and I love it!
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