Reviews for Two
MizzVicki chapter 1 . 5/2
Is sitting here bawling a review?
Cina's chapter 1 . 3/21
Wow great story. But I hate sad endings like this one. "Sigh"
RowanBronze chapter 1 . 3/19
Eeeek! This was heartbreakingly good!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/1
Can I just say that I absolutely hate Leah and Jessica because of their jealousy and insecureness not mention vindictiveness they couldn't keep their goddamn closed (Jessica)and mind their own business (Leah) I hope they are happy now because thanks to them they emotionally killed a young girl Great story but it would be amazing if you started it again but longer and different
angel1hall chapter 1 . 2/19
wow so not where i thought this story was going. i need a box of tissues now.
Thank you for sharing your gift.
robertpatzlover09 chapter 1 . 2/11
im sorry this was meant to be a complicated situation kind of story but i really fucking hate edward and he can suck my ass
tpec1991 chapter 1 . 1/3
OMG! I'm crying my brains out! You should have warnes us it did't have a HEA! Still beautiful though, beautiful tragedy.
morena.davidson.3 chapter 1 . 12/3/2014
So sad. A little communication, some real discussion would have helped. Thanks for sharing. xo
booksxforxlife chapter 1 . 11/26/2014
Why the fuck would you write this?! I was bawling my eyes out the entire time! I hate you.
nattynel80 chapter 1 . 11/16/2014
This is so sad. Well written. I feel part of their pain
Watermelon babe chapter 1 . 11/8/2014
Hi ! It is so heartbreaking, i read that just before going to bed, and i cried so much ! My heart was broken literally i understand totally what she was going through
But i must say, thank you for writing such a beautiful text !
Bye :)
lola-cullen-salvatore chapter 1 . 11/7/2014
Wow great story. he was an ass and she pays first it. Life is so unfair.
marley01 chapter 1 . 10/17/2014
Fuck that was good
ruinedbyrob chapter 1 . 10/16/2014
So powerful and sad for such a short story.
TLammy chapter 1 . 9/24/2014
So sad. Thanks for sharing.
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