|Reviews for All That's Left|
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/11/2014
Okay, this is disturbing. Well written, but disturbing.
| meelee729697 chapter 1 . 3/6/2014
Damn i was hoping she'd turn him..
But, listening to the story, i figured not
Well, like he said... "what a way to go."
Nice tale. ... as usual. :)
| robsessed1123 chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
good story! ty bb
| EdwardCullenizor chapter 1 . 1/24/2012
Nom, Nom Sexy!
| Gidget922 chapter 1 . 10/30/2011
Completely Fantastic story!
Love your creative imagination and flow of words and thoughts
| fanfictionalcolic chapter 1 . 9/15/2011
why the shy guys? I think there is a lot more to know about her
| flora926 chapter 1 . 4/27/2011
Dark and disturbing, but so much fun!
| Siriusmunchkin chapter 1 . 4/24/2011
Definitely different. Was really hoping Edward would turn the tables and be the one to kill her. Oh well. Good story.
| Tesha Alise Cullen chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
holy crap. that was all kinds of awesome. found this on the FFFW site. i am going to author alert you. can't wait for more. whew!
| E's My Brand Of Heroin chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
F * ck! I mean, I knew it was a os and I'm not sure how I thought it would end, but, f * ck! I wanted it to be different *pouts.* I wanted her to change him or at least make all the other kids see him differently. Wah! I am a big bb who likes sunshine and roses blown up her butt. Lol.
Great story though. But maybe you can write a special ending just for wp's like me.
| Just4ALE chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
That was sad and freaky! Gah. No wonder you won a prize!
| Lindz26 chapter 1 . 1/31/2011
I really, really, really liked this a lot.
I love reaching into the AU realm and Bella being the baddy is fascinating to me.
I enjoyed seeing her cultivate this shy Edward into her conquest, her trophy. Her mind control over him, training him into the perfect contestant for her sport was intriguing to me.
She played her part well with a very strong finish. I thought I would want her to save him, to feel differently, but the way it ended was right...it was who she is. You stayed so true and believable to her nature and I enjoyed that.
Great story...congrats on your award. A really great read for me!
| stuff4ang chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
Decided to give this a read after Trust, Love, & Sex. Glad I did! I really like your Vamp Bellas. Congrats way after the fact ;o) In my mind, Bella decided Edward was special & very different than all her other conquests and changed him to "live" HEA... (Yeah, I'm a sap.)
| afonalaw chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
Great story! I loved how you had Bella and Edward's story unfold, how she didn't see him at first all the way to him walking willingly into the forest with her. Congrats on your 3rd place!
| SebastienRobichaud chapter 1 . 10/26/2010
Very well done, MAL.
Thank you for writing,