|Reviews for Diary|
| LizziePaige chapter 1 . 9/12/2013
What a wonderful story, you are an incredible writer who takes your reader on a journey - whether it be a short trip like this, or a longer voyage, I feel like I am right there beside you. My daughter suffers from clinical depression and has attempted to take her own life in the past when the black days became too much for her to bare, so I can feel Alice's pain here as I have seen it and lived it with her. Thank you for this story, for writing it and for sharing it with us. To those who do suffer from overwhelming depression, I hope your darkest days become lighter and your burdens become fewer. To those who love them and attempt to help guide them through the dark days I wish you strength, resilience, patience and determination to see it through!
| lynzylee chapter 1 . 5/5/2011
Sad face...that is all
| twlighttina chapter 1 . 10/21/2010
but loved it ...
| PhoenixMP3 chapter 1 . 10/20/2010
I love this very sad but love it none the less :)
| AgronWorshipper chapter 1 . 10/18/2010
OH MY GOD. i seriously cried after i finished reading this. The emotion in this story is just unbelievable. So deep. So powerful. kinda confused at first but it turned AMAZING in the end. One of my most fave stories here. WELL DONE!
| keyecullen chapter 1 . 10/17/2010
That was so dark and so sad but beautifully written.
| texas princess chapter 1 . 10/17/2010
You conveyed more emotions in a few words than some authors struggle to put into an entire story. I am sitting here with tears in my eyes. Such a beautiful and tragic story.
| Zakhariahz chapter 1 . 10/17/2010
wow...this was seriously epic. love your words.
| koko23cat chapter 1 . 10/17/2010
Oh! So sad! I feel really tearful after reading that...good luck in the challenge...I hope you win, that was a really powerful piece of writing x
| A Picture Says It All chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
Thank you (again lol) for writing for the contest :o)
| FFpassion chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
Good luck with your entry, this was so beautiful & emotional. Depression touches so many people these days.
You touched a nerve with me, a very close family member suffers from it and everyday is a struggle not just for them but also the family.
You wrote this so well, I'm crying as I'm writing this.