|Reviews for Life on Thedas|
| Darth Hawk 32 chapter 21 . 7/11
I'm not normally one for self inserts, but I like what you did with this one. Rather than having it be a straightup "This is me in Dragon Age" you actually have us asking some questions about your protagonist.
| correnhimself316 chapter 13 . 6/13
Oh boy, this is some Persona shite here!
| SNicole25 chapter 21 . 8/23/2014
Wait . . . Ventus isn't an elf . . . is he?
| redbarron297 chapter 21 . 6/16/2014
So I just read this whole thing in a day. I', loving the story, though chapter pacing could use a little work, and group chemistry I am, neverthless, excited to see the story of Ventus. It's awesome.
| Doombug chapter 1 . 6/4/2014
ugh little to no plot warping and everyone is in character? I hope or what is the point to read the story at all I might as well just play the game for the 7th time, if you aren't going to change anything there isn't a reason to write a story
| axleonex chapter 1 . 4/10/2014
lol, I find it ironic you think the character is Mary sue when what you just described is exactly the opposite of what Mary sue is.
| Guest chapter 21 . 11/20/2013
So this is over that blows
| NoOneInParticular17 chapter 2 . 9/1/2013
well this story sucks. Your charter can barley use a sword and can absolutely do nothing else but be cannon fodder or comic relief. This kind of story is just as bad as a mary-sue/gary-stu insert. You have a charter who has the skill range of a child and somehow he's suppose to survive the hordes of enemies. This stories not worth reading
| Tirion I chapter 21 . 7/14/2013
Well, the name that came to him makes sense then... but wait, surely he'd have noticed by now if he was an elf. Ferelden is racist enough about them, surely one would have called him knife-ear or something... then again, in this 'verse, mixed-race offsprings appear to be human, e.g.: Slim Couldry.
| In caverns dark chapter 21 . 5/19/2013
| Inverness chapter 21 . 5/14/2013
Fantastic story. It's too bad you've stopped updating it.
| Ann chapter 21 . 4/19/2013
Hey You must continue this story! I like it.
| axleonex chapter 21 . 2/6/2013
how did you choose you're songs? they go really well with the story!
| Konous the grey chapter 21 . 12/12/2012
I'm just gonna call you a son uva bitch once.
You son uva bitch.
This is a fantastic story, I'm glad to see I'm not the only one who considered becoming part abomination in a story, thankfully you've satisfied that itch of mine. I appreciate that greatly.
On the other hand, it says here you haven't updated since 2011. This is a problem, you see I love your fucking story and it makes me sad to think that you've left it alone this long.
Update it please, your stream of consciousness writing is too hilarious and poignant for you to just let this go.
| digijim95 chapter 21 . 12/11/2012
Holy Shit. Is there an Origin you haven't incorporated yet? I know this hasn't been updated, in like, a year and a half, but I really hope you come back to this, it's awesome. Really awesome. I don't normally read DA fanfiction but an author named S3ek mentioned this at the start of his DA SI and I had to check it out, I'm really glad I did. Again, I don't hold out a lot of hope, but this was really well done and I hope you decide to continue it, I need to find out who "The hanged man" is!