|Reviews for Have You Ever Swum with the Nargles|
| Mandirrr chapter 1 . 11/11/2010
I love this:) A lot! Great story:)
| Ms Sherlock Holmes chapter 1 . 10/19/2010
Loved it! Poor Harry! He was trying so hard to get Ginny alone! Great work!
| Stephanie O chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
I really liked your story! I could just sense Harry's frustration trying to get Ginny alone at her b-day party, and never would have imagined the effects of the contraceptive charm on a virgin boy! ;) (OUCH!) Loved Harry's gift to Ginny as well...I find it interesting that he would be able to tell the different snitches apart to know which one was from which game, but how did he get his hands on the snitch Ginny caught her 4th year? I think it might help clarify things at the end to have some sort of divider or separation between the part where Harry & Ginny are laying down making out on the dock and the next morning when Ron & Hermione find them. That part was a tad bit confusing at first, until I realized that it was the next morning. Just a suggestion, though! Great job on your story, and thanks for writing!
| Feff chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
A fun nargle filled romp!
| Mister Bigglesworth chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
Story Added to C2: Harry's Lemonade Stand