a dick brain naruto useless fic

Absolutely an amazing story keep up the good work

Hey I really like the story and the way you are going about it really like your idea of mixing it with eve online. I like your take on the pairing with Naruto and Morinth it's really rare. Your idea for dealing with the Ardat-Yakshi thing really good and i can't wait to see how it plays out especially when the meeting between her and her mother Samara comes up. Anyway hope you keep going with this story And your others hope to see them be completed. :)

more plz more this fic is so amazing i love it i can't wait for more :{l}

you need to atleast check your chapters before you upload them, in the last chapter you forgot to change from bold font.

and now it's cursive.

I simply have to be a total nerd right now and tell you: the GARDIAN-lasers of the Geth would've actually posed a threat to the drones.

If Naruto cure Morinth, he should find a way for her to have children.

hope naruto get's his own ship rebuilt soon. though the other races won't be able to be arrogant any longer if the other human reconnect with their roots so to speak.

got to say it's a pretty good fic but i got one question for you what is stopping you from changing the pairing again to a harem?

It's been a while since a lingered in this crossover section and was surprised to see 2 chapters added to this. I was sure you gave up on it really need to favorite this so it doesn't happen again.

Props to the detailed and believable explanation behind the ardat yakshi disorder. The whole NarutoXmorinth thing whenever it's done, it's done CHEAPLY. It would always boil down to naruto having strong lifeforce so he can't die, or some use of clones (in this case naruto can come back to life via clones). Here however she gets semi cured with clear cut after effects. This shows a deal of thought and research and also sets the stage for them to actually build a believable relationship.

All this being said, you still have that "telling" rather than "showing" way of writing. By this i mean you present your story in the past tense. It's like you're retelling events that happened. When you're "showing" it's like you're telling the story as it unfolds in the present tense. If you could overcome this hurdle this could easily blow a LOT of stories clear out the water.

And on a side note: About the guns, Our guns Are in fact around the same power as the guns in mass effect. I think you're getting the big ass mass accelerators on dreadnoughts mixed up with the weapons foot soldiers use. A normal gun in mass effect only fires bullets off at super sonic speeds but they have less mass, our bullets travel faster than sound but they easily have more mass so it may balance out in terms of power, other factors like range and bullet drop are a different story tho.

I look forward to more.

i found this story today and i have to say i really like it its unique and different from the other naruto mass effect crossovers i greatly look forward to more.

Kinda forced.
Tali needed him, not the other way around.
Her distrust is agreeable but her reaction to it was beyond stupid. Naruto could have easily left her. And why would she automatically assume him to be with Cerberus yet discount Sakura? When they're obviously a team.

Found this 'The projectile is launched at supersonic velocities by decreasing its mass in a mass effect field.' here ' ma sse ffec kia wik i/We apo ns'.
If one does the math for both sides, you would find that they would be around the same strength, just mass effect guns have a ton of ammo. So our guns could work, just we would run out of ammo. However, everyone has the right to choose how to make their own path. Feel free to ignore everything I have said, your choice.

good chap

You know i lurk around the crossover section i i've seen this story for some time and just wrote it off because i see miranda as the main pairing. i HATE that bitch with a passion. Shear boredom forced me to read this story and i have to say it's very interesting. The only thing that left a foul taste in my mouth was knowing miranda would be the pairing. Then i read chapter 10 and saw you switched to morinth. I can't tell you how refreshing it is to see the pairing move to that direction. Sure morinth isn't my favorite character, but she's an interesting one none the less and it's sickening how everyone seems to fall in line an pair naruto with fem shep, miranda, or tali.