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Guest chapter 2 . 7/23
I would do Halt kicks butt then becomes the greatest ranger ever... Anyways good job!
AtlantianHuman chapter 1 . 4/15/2015
Ohmygoshplzcontinueplz
Guest chapter 2 . 3/26/2015
4, number4!
will ranger 12 chapter 2 . 11/8/2014
halt is about to ' not make it through ' but some how survived and save halt
Estel Half-Elven chapter 2 . 9/29/2014
Huh...what about Will actually being alive? Cause this was so sad and if Halt dies too...nuh uh.
Snowy101 chapter 2 . 4/11/2014
I cry every time I read this! It's an amazing story so far! Please update it soon! I know you haven't updated in a long time but I really want this book to be continued!
Noxy the Proxy chapter 2 . 4/11/2013
Man this is a great write more!
moon princess chapter 2 . 6/14/2012
I like your story i was deffenetly looking for a tragety right now because my grammpa died. I say option 4 because i think will and halt should be to gether
Firenze Fox chapter 1 . 3/15/2012
YOU ARE TOOO GOOD THIS STORY ACTUALLY MADE ME CRY! :')
Idk chapter 2 . 2/1/2012
You gotta make it so that halt kicks but then just as he is swarmed and overwhelmed will comes back(magic or his oak leaf deflected the blade or something) and completely wrecks everyone
sneaky lunitic spy chapter 2 . 12/18/2011
i like option 4 Halt kicks but then doesn't make it threw. because then he will be with his son Will
Hyunji Lee chapter 2 . 5/28/2011
option 2
SoulMistress12 chapter 2 . 5/12/2011
Is this on Hiatus or something...? Becurz I LURV your writing and it's SO awesome! Please update I'm w/ Option 4, as I said on my last review!

YOU RULE! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE AND U WILL RULE EVEN MORE!
StoopdFoxx chapter 2 . 4/27/2011
Are you not going to finnish?

I hope you do because it is so totally

AWESOME!
SoulMistress12 chapter 2 . 3/15/2011
Okay, let's see:

I would like option number 4...

But then, if I could just suggest something, option five: Halt kills all of the bandits in a slow and torture-filled way, and then he commits suicide. For an extra cruel touch... Heheh... I'm in a very death-filled mood right now... There's something wrong with me.

~SoulMistress12
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