|Reviews for The Golden Era|
| TwelveEyes chapter 5 . 11/30/2012
Reading both the previous story and this one, I can say your writing technique has improved with time, but your formatting could use some improvement. You should put a space between the sentences of dialogue when a new speaker says something.
I'm looking forward to your next update, and will be watching this story with interest.
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 11/21/2012
Hey, I read everything! From the first fanfic to this sequel! I can't believe i just found this recently. It's amazing! XD It's really well written and I love everything about it! XDDD Sorry for being all hyper about it..This is just an amazing fanfiction, seriously. X))) Can't wait to read more!
| hewhoreaps chapter 5 . 7/19/2012
Well glad to see this updated.
It seems Anna and Gabriel are having questions raised about their marriage etc that seems to rattle Anna more then Gabriel but he isn't totally unsettled by the questions.
That said please try to update more often and keep up the good work
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/5/2012
I hope you haven't given up on this story entirely! I was rather enjoying it. Even if you never post again, I really liked your portrayals of all the characters in this and in the previous story. Excellent work!
| SadisticBeauty30 chapter 4 . 3/21/2012
AHH I AM OBSESSED WITH THIS STORY & BRIGHTER SIDE OF DEATH. duude.. im DYIN here for a update! * jumps around the room * please please please i beg you update. i need to know what happens! very good job by the way, if you hadnt got the drift yet that you are an amazing writer :)
| Jill chapter 4 . 1/3/2012
Ooh please update:( I miss this story! I'm obsessed with your writing you do such a good job!
| Guest chapter 4 . 9/12/2011
Amazing story, amazing sequel. Please update soon
| hewhoreaps chapter 4 . 7/27/2011
Again glad to see this story updated.
It seems Matthias wants to help but Anna with her trust issues in regards to vampire's is making things difficult.
Of course there is also the issue of where and what is going on with Van Helsing in all of this.
| angel de acuario chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
| hewhoreaps chapter 3 . 4/24/2011
Glad to see this updated. That said since we don't know what the letters were written on, there can be debate as to what if anything sinister Matthias and Van Helsing would have written.
Anna is unnerved by everything thats happening and still has issues trusting vampires.
| aleera-mistressofallevil chapter 2 . 11/19/2010
Please, please, PLEASE update soon!
| fan chapter 2 . 11/9/2010
please this story is amazing plz can you add a couple more chapters! rly awesome:)
| hewhoreaps chapter 2 . 11/6/2010
Somehow I get the feeling Matthias isn't much better then Dracula was maybe even worse though we'll find that out in the future chapters I'm sure.
The bigger question is what information is Matthais truly after from Anna and/or Anna and how things fit in the bigger picture.
| Secret Admirer omg chapter 1 . 10/23/2010
Well well, my dear, this is very nice! (I am having a good chuckle at submitting a Creepy Lurker review instead of a signed one. Also at having commandeered the TV from the Xbox-obsessed boys I live with in order to watch the 6 hour Pride and Prejudice. Hooray!)
I like the idea of Anna, for all her know-it-all-ness, never having traveled much or seen many cities. For all her physical strength and battle smarts, she's remarkably uncouth and uncultured-kind of a boor, if you think about it. I bet that's a great source of angst for her, and probably one of the unspoken tensions with Dracula, who was so much a man of the world. Come to think of it, though, wouldn't she have seen *something* of Budapest when she was with him? Or has she completely blocked out her experiences with him?
I'm glad you used the word trousers instead of pants. And then things get exciting! (Though why does her heart beat? She's a vampire, right? She should have no heartbeat...or am I being too picky? Or forgetting something important?) Despite the (acknowledged in the caveat) lack of a clear arc at the moment, I enjoyed this chapter and thought it was really compelling. I like the True Blood-esque idea of vampire overlords, in this case Matthias, and I'm eager to see what will happen with that. Will he have "taken offense" (as you say) to her having killed Richard Roxburgh? Will he turn out to be pleased that she has rid him of Drac & Co.? You'd better update fast or all the rabid Gabe fans will freak out. Also the Anna fans, assuming those exist haha :)
As for the style, I don't mind the smaller paragraphs. I agree that the long ones look clunky on this site and can be difficult to get through. As long as your paragraph divisions and transitions are logical, you should be fine.
Well Lizzie is about to go visit Charlotte and Mr. Collins and have Darcy clumsily declare his love so I need to pay attention to the TV now.
| hewhoreaps chapter 1 . 10/17/2010
Well things are going to be very interesting. Though my question about be how Matthias had gotten word of people of interest being in Budapest but be that as it may.
Well things aren't looking great for Anna and who knows about Van Helsing