|Reviews for Affinity|
| m2mckillip chapter 1 . 11/30/2016
Hi! I just wanted to drop a note saying that I love your writing. I read Stirring of the Leaves and it is by far my favorite Hobbit fic. I love your writing style and character representation! I really hope you decide to continue adding to this story because I think you'd do an amazing job with it!
Thanks for the stories and please keep writing!
| Adelaide's Anagram chapter 5 . 9/1/2016
Ah, I really enjoyed that! Snape's really vindictive, though, isn't he? Interesting to read from the perspective of such a severe character, his intelligence comes shining through. Lots of interesting things to think about, and it's got suspense despite being cannon-compliant, nicely done!
Speaking of, I know you haven't updated in a while, but I'm curious to see how you would pull it off; it's hard to believe Snape having a friendship with Hermione without there being ripples, and perhaps even tidal waves over 7 years! How long can she go without saying anything to Ron and Harry? What about the half-blood prince? What about her romance with Ron? What about SNAPE DYING?! (erm...spoilers?) You can't just tell me friendship doesn't have affect on events, particularly how Snape views Harry 'n' Ron and vice versa!
Ehh...I dunno about favorite non-canon couples... Neville deserves a good girl though, any suggestions? Ron and Luna I NEVER considered, but I suppose they would be good to each other, and Ron's exasperated fondness of Luna's zaniness would be darling.
Anyway, read it, liked it, would review if you wrote more.
| AnaBookWorm chapter 5 . 12/18/2015
I really love this story, I hope you're going to continue it!
| themaltesefalcon chapter 5 . 11/9/2015
Oh gosh, I know you'll probably never continue this, but I just ship them so much in this story (in the future of course, when she's not underage), and I hope someday you maybe update again. I've never seen a HG/SS story done in this way - it's ingenious! All the little moments that totally could have happened in canon from the very beginning (though I reallyyyyy hope that eventuallyyy it will break off from canon - before the seventh book's epilogue at least!). It's actually beautiful, and I love the title and the concept behind it too, in addition to your lovely writing style. I was immediately hooked by this story, and thank you so much for sharing it.
| unknown chapter 5 . 10/15/2015
i do hope you continue this! :)
| PurpleCat1245 chapter 5 . 7/3/2015
I love this story! It's very well written and detailed. I hope you decide to continue it... even though you haven't written since 2011... Please, please, please, please, please, please, update! I really want to read more.
The only thing I would suggest is that you do not make this a romance, mostly because it'd be very weird. As of now in this story, Snape it 33 and Hermione is 13. That'd be an odd romance...
Otherwise, please continue to do what you are doing and write more!
| aguamarine1116 chapter 5 . 4/3/2015
Hi! I'm a new reader of yours, having first read Stirring the Leaves and now reading your other stories, and I have to tell you that you are a wonderful writer, and have such an expansive imagination that can put together all these intricate details of your plots and canon. I noticed you haven't worked on this story, Affinity, and four years, which is really a shame, because I happen to like Hermione and Severus together. Oh, right, and also because I love the way this story has been going.
I'm going to go read more of your stories now, I know I won't disappointed
| AmandaSingh0 chapter 5 . 10/13/2014
i think i would like this better as a snape mentors hermione sorta fic. i've read many snape/hermione fic but never a mentoring fic between them.
UPDATE PLEASE !
| AP.Violin chapter 5 . 10/6/2014
Pleaaaaaaase continue! Pretty please? This is by far one of the best HG/SS friendship fics in the early years, and there aren't many sadly, so please don't leave us hanging :')
| Minerva-Athena chapter 5 . 7/19/2014
I've loved this story for so long! Please consider updating it. You haven't left - you've updated other stories recently!
Really, though, this is one of the best Harry Potter fics, and it's not even complete. Please? Pretty please? One more chapter? I only have nine fanfics downloaded on my phone, and this is one of them! It's also the only incomplete one!
| Genevieve Darcy Granger chapter 5 . 6/13/2014
Yelp i want more of this story.
| SophieNewman chapter 5 . 5/5/2014
What happened? Why didn't you update for so long? It says the last update was in 2011. Hmm...
Anyway. Just wanted to say that I like this story, even though I'm not a fan of SS/HG ships. I guess you have a way with words... :)
Of you're still there, I hope you update! Thanks! :)
| 3Dramione3 chapter 5 . 2/23/2014
Well Dramione of course! I just love the whole "Forbidden love"-concept, especially when Draco is a veela and Hermione is his mate ;) !
Awesome chapter, but please update soon?!
| DoraLupinTonks chapter 5 . 12/16/2013
Hiiiii...awesome but won't you update anymore?
| DragonOwl chapter 5 . 6/28/2013
Another amazing fic! Is this going to be continued or not? Just wondering! It's really great though, your writing is excellent as always!