|Reviews for Meeting the New Girl|
| buttsexbaggins chapter 1 . 3/25/2011
This was really sweet:') I wish there was more coming...hint hint ;D
| mojoman3061 chapter 1 . 10/18/2010
I like this very much. Your Lizzie has a protectiveness toward "her Gordo" that rings true. Perceptive of her to see the same trait in Miranda.
Miranda's "Have I come at a bad time?" story is hilarious.
"The little hint of Asia" in Lori's features suggests to me a passing resemblance to Miranda.
"Coming to wait Lizzie felt was like a random stop, Miranda reached out and pounded on the door." There seems to be a typo in this sentence. Should "wait" be "what"?
I had trouble placing everyone in the apartment. I figured Gordo wasn't visible from the door when Miranda barged her way inside. When Lori led Lizzie to the couch, where were Gordo and Miranda? "Miranda elbowed Gordo in the ribs" came out of nowhere. A few lines down, Gordo "walk[s] over." Was he not on the couch? These things aren't clear.
| Abuhin chapter 1 . 10/17/2010
Whoa! Now here's a blast from the past. Surprised to see you writing this again. I myself don't think I've read LM fics in over two years. It's been like, "Hmm, why was this person on my alert list, again? I don't read Twilight or Gossip Girl."
Anyway, nice oneshot. "David"/OC is a very underused concept.