Reviews for Created to Be
Rue chapter 1 . 9/2/2013
I love this story! Edward is so carefree and in love! I love it! Great job! :)
Guest chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
:) I love your writing! How old are you? I mean, not trying to be creeper or anything, but a lot of authors on ff are teens-young adults. Your writing is very mature, and well thought out. It seems serious and romantic, but you put in just the right touches of humor. Great Job!
soulmatesrocks chapter 1 . 2/9/2013
DAMN, u deserve WAY more reviews than you all your work
Twi-madkat18 chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
very funny lmao and soooooo sweet, loved it :)
jean B chapter 1 . 5/12/2012
This one shot is just a glimpse of what true love is all about. It is loving the good, the bad and not so attractive about another person,and wanting their happiness more than your own. Good job displaying sexual love instead of porn.
Clever xXx Pseudonym chapter 1 . 6/17/2011
ohhh Emmett... haha funny and cute. nice ;)
Sarahippy chapter 1 . 4/11/2011
This is AMAZING. So romantic and beautiful... You should be so proud! It is a pleasure to read something so well written :) x
sholtsclaw698 chapter 1 . 2/10/2011
great job! loved it
Natalia Mazaur chapter 1 . 1/22/2011
Oh man, you published this story on my birthday! (10-17!) I love it! Thank you!
TwilightNJonas4Ever chapter 1 . 1/14/2011
Aww this is so cute! And Emmett was hilarious xD loved the whole phone conversation :)
natalie louise xo chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
awsomeee xx
SusayyQ chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
Aweeee soo swweeettt!
Sugargirl5 chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
I was smiling the entire time while I was reading this :). Loveloveloved it!
magnessina chapter 1 . 10/26/2010
That was simply amazing!

I rarely find a fic that showes me the canon Edward. Edward who loves and adores Bella, at the same time not fully believing that he deserves to be loved in return. He does, oh my god, does he deserve it.

I loved your sense of humour, especially when it came to Emmett. You showed us not a stupid joker, but a witty guy who cares about his little brother, even if he makes their converation more... humour-ish? :) I even have some favourite lines:

"Walking on water was a talent that only Jesus seemed to have...even though Emmett had tried many times" - it was awesome. I can totally imagine Emmett trying to walk on water like Jesus ;D

"Okay, I'm gonna cut the shit. Have you devirginized yourself yet?" - that's what I'm talking about. Epic jokes, seriously.

"That hurt, Edward. I'm like your sexual mentor!" - and here I laughed to the point of tears ;D

I loved how Esme was concerned about Bella's well-being. I loved how Carlisle believed that Bella's love completes Edward. I simply loved how you showed the parents' attention; Edward might be a 100-year-old vampire, and yet they care about him. It's beautiful.

Scenes with Edward and Bella were my favourite, though. You've showed their newly-found intimacy so tastefully. I bow down to you.

All in all, thank you. You've made my day with this little piece of work. It was sweet, romantic funny and absolutely perfect.

I apologise for any mistakes; English is not my native language.

Loads of love from Poland,

Harrigination chapter 1 . 10/19/2010
nice:) so sweet:) haha , to be continued...?:D xx
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