|Reviews for Demons|
| Calyptra chapter 7 . 11/30/2014
You should decide on either first or third person. Sometimes you switch midsentence abd it's aShane because it finds your otherwise nice writing.
I am intrigued. I wonder what is up with Peter.
| BloodyCrystal Panora chapter 16 . 9/21/2014
u really need to update i love it
| AngelMaree chapter 16 . 7/9/2014
| jaspersgirl100 chapter 1 . 11/30/2013
that was amazing and I can't wait to see read the other chapters ahead its a cool story
| Guest chapter 16 . 3/27/2012
Ive been waiting for this chapter forever:)!So Excited! !keep posting cant wait to see wait h happens next!#!:) luving the lemony goodness keep them sour and leave us giddy;) please update soon
| Babysis64 chapter 16 . 3/24/2012
not a bad story at all but what got Jasper back into human blood this is different but i like it so thank you and have a good week to come
| Babysis64 chapter 7 . 3/24/2012
to me when Bella broke up with Edward and said the stuff he said to her and when Peter was there to comfort her she should of told him what Edward had all said to her and what is to Jasper he wasn't invited to swim with them now was he so he has no right to be mad at her at all
| michelle2935 chapter 16 . 1/28/2012
I love it PLEASE write more
| seza3175 chapter 16 . 1/12/2012
I really like it! Update soon! I'm excited for more!
| seza3175 chapter 15 . 1/12/2012
Wow I absolutely loved this chapter!
| seza3175 chapter 14 . 1/5/2012
Loving this story!
| Angelbaby1991 chapter 16 . 1/4/2012
| TwilightAddict71484 chapter 16 . 1/4/2012
well that was climatic..what is with bella and all her indecisiveness? post again soon.
| katandjasper chapter 16 . 1/4/2012
I do want a lemon between them, its boring to not have one.
| wendy1969 chapter 16 . 1/4/2012
How come he said all that stuff he was apologising for. it actually hurt her hearing it. did he even think to stop and sort it out. Anyway, i aint too sure on much so i better reread it. i cant seem to remember much about it.