Omg. I actually lyk this story. Its so good I jst put in twilight dvd. Lol. I wanna watch it now. Haha. Update soon.

Lmao. Omg. I knew bella was gon' get hurt. Haha. She was staring at edward 4 2 long. Hahaha. I'm a jacob fan and kant wait til dey meet. Yay!

I don't really read any Twilight stories but this one is awesome! Please update soon!

Loved the chapter...I really can't wait to see what will happen next between Bella and Edward...update soon :D

hey hey!

i likw using exclamitions. hehe

nwae cool chpter. just wondering tho, this edward seems evil and not the nice kind. were u taking the story girl? keep me update u hear!

i think u sud use more descriptive words and metaphors that kinda laguage to give a clear image coz somewere along the story i get confused to wat um suppossed to see. no hard feelings hey.

nwae cant wait for the next chpter. PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNN!

lts of love

jeeennniiiee

hey!

jake to the rescue! loving it! LOL cool chpter. but daje, jake dosent look like a caveman come on :-(seriously! aint gonna take it to heart coz ur story just so damn good! so the next chpter is wen edward is gonna come! cnt wait

kip up the great work hey chom

JEn

hey hey!

cool story! great that u going to include both jacob and edward but im team jacob! so WHO HO! nwae great chapter so far, u keepingto the basics but spicing them up a bit. hope bella is more confident not the shy akward bella from twilight wee loved but hated in the movie. hehe! nwae cool story so far hey!

grosses bien!

Jennie

I really really like this story, almost as much as I liked Human Compensation. I can't wait to see how this story goes ;p