|Reviews for Forever Isn't Enough|
| Maiden Warrior chapter 4 . 10/23/2013
This...is...TOO ADORABLE! OMG! KYAAAA!
I MISS YOU! This is really amazing to read! (crying)
Keep it up! XD
| Gam Feng chapter 4 . 10/18/2013
I hope that secret past isn't going to come back like it usually does.
| LotsOfChocolateOnTop chapter 3 . 7/15/2013
Oh my Thank You! I'm so glad that this is here. I just finished Seven Days, and the second I ended it, I told my brain, "I need more. Now." Thirty seconds later, I'm on fanfiction and I see this! I love your writing and how you were able to transfer the light-toned side of their dynamic from manga to writing. Please Please PLEASE update! I really enjoyed what you wrote so far, and I can't wait for more. (And if it's not too much to ask (it probably is), do you think you could maybe write some smutty items in future chapters? (If you don't do that, I understand))
| Ch3rry Chibi chapter 3 . 5/2/2013
oowhh, really! i love it! they're so cute here, for the reaction over the situation...
ahaha, i could't jelp myself but to like it
and your words very nice... not very heavy but can descripe all of what need to explain
i'm begging you, please make the next chapter!
| Ssindel chapter 3 . 3/31/2013
Please continue argh I'm really loving this! The characterisation and interactions are so perfect and I'm really loving
This so far! Keep up the good
| Solider of Lucifer chapter 1 . 12/21/2012
| yconne chapter 3 . 12/6/2012
This is so wonderful! It's very cute, please update soon :D
| SadieSadie chapter 3 . 11/11/2012
You are... AMAZING. Update soon!
| grimdreamer chapter 3 . 10/20/2012
Oh no, last chapter for now! So final review for now and hopefully enough to keep those fingers typing a brand-new chapter some day...
Again, you've surprised me with the scenes you focused on. I was feeling intrigued about the way Seryou behaved when he realised what a mess they had made of the kitchen, which makes me wonder why it bothered him so much and what this might reveal about the character's past. I don't mind if you're taking a slightly darker root in order to explore some kind of development - that moment intrigued me a lot, it really did!
And I like how you showed the difference between Seryou and Yuzuru's backgrounds with the way Seryou struggled to chop vegetables. Yuzuru's thinking is so considerate and a little mischievous! The shower scene was just heart-warming too, and pleasantly chaste, despite the close proximity Yuzuru had with a naked Seryou.
It's cute how Seryou also says "Excuse me" before entering the bedroom. It struck me as realistic since the Japanese say such things when they enter an intimate place like somebody's home ("o-jamashimasu", which means something like "sorry for the intrusion", even though you invited them!) Shame there are no more chapters to read, but I understand you are busy!
Keep writing when you can :)
| grimdreamer chapter 2 . 10/20/2012
I must say that the scene where Yuzuru answers the door without his shirt on is by far the best scene in your story - and I say this, having already read Chapter 3! In fact, I would go so far as to say that it is the best scene in any romance story I've read on this site, due to its sheer simplicity and the fact that I've been guilty of the same assumption: that Yuzuru's a bit 'soft'. That was exceptionally observant and surprised me like it did Seryou.
The dilemma which Seryou discussed with Yuzuru as well was extremely good too. When you haven't gone "all the way" with your partner, it can worry someone, whether their partner still has an interest in them, and I thought this was a great conversation between the two characters. It also kept that light-hearted, cute atmosphere we know and love from the manga! I'm really grateful for that!
I hope you carry on writing :)
| grimdreamer chapter 1 . 10/20/2012
Hey, I read this on the bus a couple of weeks ago and decided to write a review for you when I couldn't help but read it again.
It's good so far! Most of the time I couldn't tell that English is your second language (by the way, "investigate matters into his own hands" is usually "take matters into his own hands") and I really admire your ability to use English to convey this story. It captures the essence of the manga with ease and I could imagine the dialogue between Seryou and Yuzuru actually happening in the series itself.
The part where Seryou looked a little sad, with Yuzuru noticing, was really well done; I liked how you connected that moment later on in the chapter as it strengthened the bond which the two characters have and goes to show just how deeply their relationship goes, as well as demonstrating your clear understanding of the characters as a whole.
| redinblue chapter 3 . 9/27/2012
Hwah! Need more!
Please update this ff as soon as possible!
I thought, if the manga continue, it would be just like this since this story is simple and so cute (and also have the similar aura with the Seven Days manga).
I want more of them. I miss Seryou and Yuzuru! DX
| NightUchihaRevenge chapter 3 . 7/20/2012
This is so cute, is amazin *-*
I need read more, xD, it's so cute and sexy and cute._., i say cute? xD
I love this manga and this fic, is so... amazing xD
Sorry for the bad inglish xD
I love it. 3
| KyuuElena chapter 3 . 7/13/2012
please update its really good story
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/4/2012
Loved it please update soon!