Reviews for Deadly Envy
Guest chapter 1 . 2/21
You should make a continuation, I'm curious how this will evolve.
Nanakawa Ann chapter 1 . 1/25/2017
Amazing plot and wonderful writing-style
Imagine how interesting the story would be if it were a longfic :(
I miss you and your stories so much :'(
I'm crying
Mala137SHL chapter 1 . 1/7/2016
I don't think so, old man!
Before you laid a hand on Hinata, me or Sasuke will kill you first! Hahaha :-D
random716 chapter 1 . 8/20/2015
Amazing plot, writing and style. Emotions, thoughts and original/newish characterization is at it's finest! It would be a very interesting story if ever you'd decide to continue it.
chaitu chapter 1 . 7/29/2014
A really nice start!plz continue
RandomWyvern chapter 1 . 5/20/2014
I really enjoyed how you portrayed the characters. Your story was enterta
justanotherfan chapter 1 . 12/31/2013
I loved this so much ! Please write another chaper. Don't let this beautiful story go to waste.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/9/2013
That was intriguing. Please do a sequel!
MLeggyLeaf chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
That's awesome? Write more? I want hinat to kick sasuke?!
woodlandfairykirk chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
wow this is amazing(:
APSH chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
sasuke is deadly ticking bomb.. while hinata is a dead give away.. strange.. hahah
HoshiNoTsuya chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
Wait a minute Miss, you just left it at the best part!
That ending is more a cliffhanger than an ending!
You give me a deadly plot... and an ending to suicide... haha, ok a bit dramatic. But I really do want to know what comes next.
Why does Madara want Hinata alive? If you had not written that dialogue, I would've been at peace with the ending.
Well, overall it was amazingly well written. Sasuke gave me powerful images, I could really get his anger. And Hinata was really good as well. I guess Sasuke was the one who made all this plot possible, and therefore, the main character. Yet I feel that Hinata is the one that makes the story worth telling.
It's a bit sad this stayed as a one shot.
If you ever decide to write what hapenned after this chapter, then please let me know :)
Thanks for the words!
nikol chapter 1 . 6/17/2012
please please please sequel. it was amazing how could you leave us hanging?
Ame Ichiya chapter 1 . 3/2/2012
No sequel? I thought it's a story haha
372259 chapter 1 . 8/11/2011

your writingthis plot AMAZING SASUHINA STORY :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
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