Reviews for Onset
rekcuf137 chapter 1 . 8/4
I had to stop reading this several times because I was laughing too hard. This was awesome! I love how much humor and dialog you can add and still keep everyone in character! love it!
WTGaff chapter 1 . 7/10
All I have to say is that THIS one is begging to be made into a cartoon, possibly a series of comic strips.
starfirenight chapter 1 . 8/21/2014
And of course I LOVE this one...
erzascarletmeow chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
Damn this was hilarious! I was laughing my ass off by the time Flash ran around the world. hahaha
Electricboa chapter 1 . 4/12/2013
After being built up for a while, it's nice to see just how . . . energetic morn'lo is. The part with Batman was hilarious, who would have thought it would be that easy to steal the Dark Knight's pants?
jenny868 chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
wow amazed
Concolor44 chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
THAT WAS SOOOOO GOOOOOOD! That description of Flash's round-n-round-n-round the world trip ... priceless.

So ... wait. This was the LAST e'ara fic? Geez. I'll have to get off the dime and read the others. Which one comes first? Oh, hang on ...

Okay, cool, you DO have a chronological list! Terrific.

Anyway, this SO gets Favorited.
AnneSilverfire chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
Flash deserved it... Lol but the bit about reports of a blur and fuuuuuu, that was pure comedic genius. Haha I am literal dying of laughter. And the leather pants! Lol
Booklover9477 chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
Awesome story! Oh my god haha that was hilarious! Oooh batman flustered and flash's incident man that was epic! Keep up the great work! Can't wait to read more! Until next time, Laila :k
prettylilah chapter 1 . 4/26/2012
Hi again!

I love this fic too!

In fact, I'm not finished reading it yet. But I was so busy laughing that my eyes started to water and I had to actually stop reading.

Where am I?

At the part Star calls Candy a hideous blue bug. (shoulders shake for the snickering)

Anyway, I thought it might make you happy to know how you affect your readers.

Have a good weekend, closet-gamer!
StarCatBurning chapter 1 . 2/3/2012
Total crackup. I repeat, TOTAL CRACKUP. Wow.*Is stunned into silence (very possibly not temporary)*
SwampBandit chapter 1 . 8/11/2011
I read this back iate June when Star of Airdrie told me about it and forgot to review it. This is so funny, the Batman scene is the best part, 'Look, Dick!' oh that was classic. And that Bruce was perving over the tape with Selena and Kori, oh good lord and poor Wally.

Now that I read 'Locked Hearts' it makes a lot more sense now then when I first read it too.

Thanks for the great laugh.
Faith-o-saurus chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
Oh my goodness, this was absolutely AMAZING.

Hahaha, she jumped Bruce! I love that.
cartoonstar chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
I LOVE THIS! You get that from me a lot I know but it's true. I LOVE THIS!

Oh, the part with Batman was too funny. "Holy hot leather pants, Batman." indeed!

Oh, and the part where he warned Cyborg and then gave a thumbs up! LOL!

But I gotta say my favorite part was with Wally. Omg, the scene of the Nightwatch... it was a disaster zone! And Wally with his "Not without you." when he was searching for Nightwing made it seem like they were soldiers in a war or something lol. It was a touching moment and then Starfire appeared! Omg when she came out and all he could think was "boobies" LOL! And then he ran, poor thing. I think a therapist for him will cost more than the damage for the Nightwatch.

Oh, and I loved the part with Batman and the video watching Starfire and Catwoman. I think every boy wants to see that xD

Omg, to think that was only the practice round. How he survived the rest...

AWESOME STORY!
kawaiigurl93 chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
That...was...unbearably...hot...and...insane! But hot nonetheless. Geezuz Starfire! How Richard managed tk keep that up for 65hours! /
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