|Reviews for Spotted!|
| GummiLover chapter 17 . 8/19/2008
aww poor tohru...
and its cute how the others worry for tohru..
i cant wait till you update...
| doctorwhofan5556 chapter 17 . 8/8/2008
Great story! Please update soon!
| LibraryLady08 chapter 13 . 7/18/2008
I love to read this story. Every time I finish this chapter I am just in tears. You are able to write so well that it bring out such emotion in myself, the reader. My compassion for Tooru and the Sohmas is so strong after I read this story. I love all of your writings but this story is probably my all time favorite fanfic! I hope you will continue to add to it in the future. :)
| Fan chapter 8 . 6/22/2008
This fic is amazingly written out, I love the plot and the unique characters! However, there is one thing I'd like to add. Tohru's name is spelled "Tohru", not "Tooru."
Otherwise, I love your story, keep up the great work!
| reibunny chapter 17 . 6/19/2008
YOU'RE BACK! I MISSED YOU! Thanks so much for posting again. I love your long chapters, well worth the wait. And I loved the ending on this one. Kyon chan is SO cute!
Anyway, get well soon okay?
And don't feel bad for taking your time. Day jobs pay the bills and are part of being a grown up.
I'd rather slow but good chapters from a grown up than that rapidly updated, fast paced fluff from bored fifteen year olds that's so common on sites like these.
Theres a REASON we love you. You're a rockin' writer! Keep it up!
| angels cry too chapter 17 . 6/18/2008
i've always wondered what Tohru would be like in showbiz. can't wait for more.
| squeakee chapter 17 . 6/17/2008
Aww Kyou is so cute! i love the three of them, Kyou, Yuki and Tohru.
| Kisa167 chapter 17 . 6/9/2008
YAY! an update i've been waiting! it's really good. I still dislike harada though. Can't wait for the next chapter
lots of love always
| Chaco and Lily chapter 17 . 6/1/2008
You'd make good tv scripts XD That show had me laughing my ass off even though it was just a bunch of sexual innuendos xD
Loved the chapter (that I finally got around to reading XD )
Looking forward toreading more, whenever you get the chance : D
| Arianna chapter 17 . 5/29/2008
YAY! I was rereading full course hoping for a new chapter and then I checked your page and saw that their was another chappie of Spotted! Very good as always. Please continue.
| crazyoldwoman chapter 17 . 5/28/2008
i'm so happy you updated. _ I've been following this story for awhile, and so it is always a delight each time you update. the story is consistently good, and very sweet. i hope your schedule allows you to finish a new chapter soon! i look forward to reading more. _
| oioiodango chapter 17 . 5/26/2008
Hooray! Another update! I check your stories about once a week, looking for updates, and one is finally here! I thoroughly enjoy your stories and how you portray the characters. Please continue to write. My favorites are "Spotted" and "Discoveries."
| Hoku ala chapter 17 . 5/24/2008
Aw! Great job!
| Tifa Tyndal chapter 16 . 5/22/2008
The was one of the most enjoyable chapters I've ever read of anything. Absolutely kept the characters in character while putting them in so many different situations... and I didn't notice before but you have a lot of original characters! This is a sign of a good FF author: original characters that fit in so well you don't even think about the fact that they are original. You do them so well I am in awe of your skill. Thanks! -Tifa Tyndal
| littlesparrow33 chapter 17 . 5/21/2008
Wow, I'm so glad to see another chapter of Spotted! I know from my own writing that time often gets away from me, so I can see why it has been so long, but it's still worrying, even if there's nothing to worry about. _' Anyway... you brought up a lot of interesting stuff in this chapter; it's neat to see how Harada and Tooru's interactions are progressing and I still can't decide as a reader whether he's a good guy or not.
I'm really looking forward to seeing Hatori and Tooru when he comes to look over her injury! I love how you develop them in Full Course and it'd be something to see how Hatori reacts if the subject of dieting comes up. Maybe it'll be one of the ways in which Tooru has to say "no" to Rising Stars... Ah, a reader can dream.
Just as a brief note, when Yuki's arguing with Kyo before the show, it should be "You were too snoring..." b/c "to" would imply an action, but that's not its function in this sentence. The verb tense of "snoring" already takes care of the action in the sentence.
Well, I'll eagerly await your next chapter and I hope you enjoy Anime North!