|Reviews for Spotted!|
| Vivi007Nee chapter 17 . 5/21/2008
XD DARNIT, it's OVER...you needn't 'struggle' to keep the chapters under ANY length! Be free! Write 500 pages in one sitting, why not? XD; Anywho. Excellent chapter, please update soon, and God bless. .
P.S.: I'm so glad Hatori's coming over! I miss him!
| Berkeley chapter 17 . 5/21/2008
*pout* ended so suddenly. Do not want.
It was a lovely chapter. I very much enjoyed reading it.
I did want to know what Hiromi's catch phrase meant though... ja-ne?
| SusanneTJ chapter 17 . 5/21/2008
Nice to have you back :o) Poor Tooru! Are you going to work her to death? I hope some scheming Sohma can get her time away from the evil, scheduling Rising Star people ;o) I am looking forward to seing the bodyguards confronted with more of the family.
| ViperineVampire chapter 17 . 5/21/2008
o!yuki/tohru and kyou/tohru fluff!yay!though i wished you'd update full course...that's my absolute favourite fruit basket story. ABSOLUTE NUMBER 1 FAVOURITE!even at times when i got tired of FB fanfics, i could still read full course over and over again. i'm actually gonna reread it again now. yay!
P.S.: i can actually totally feel harada's frustration. tohru's too empty in the head sometimes i also get pissed with her bimbo-ness. i should think she should have enough sense to know about the dangers of being drugged and beaten up especially since uo-chan and her mom was previously in gangs. but well...looks like she's too clueless.
| Green Animelover chapter 17 . 5/20/2008
amazing chapter as always
| PurpleHime chapter 17 . 5/20/2008
i am usually a yuki and tohru person... but with this story... ikinda can't decide! i really really love this story... i should be sleeping right now... but i stayed up to finish this chapter... hehe! bad me... i really really do love how you show that yuki and kyo really care for tohru... so swet! update discoveries and spotted again very soon! they're my favorites!
| Nutmeg chapter 17 . 5/20/2008
Your writing is phenomenal. Everytime you update, I am already wanting the next update. While, yes, that may be selfish as a reader, it's simply because your work is addicitve. A guilty pleasure, I must say, to follow your line of work. This chapter was amazing as usual. However, in some places it felt a little bit stagnated. I'm not sure of exactly why I got that feeling, but perhaps if there was more action it would push the flow along a little faster. For example, the cooking scene was a little glossed over. I was a little confused about the names as well... but that's ok.
One idea that you might use, in the far far future, is that any other idol who gets to be friends with Tooru will get better connections. This can bring an entire wave of new situations, ne?
I love the way you have every single person in character. The skill you have when writing them astounds me. Aww.. don't blush. It's totally true. I would like to see more of the zodiac. Perhaps Momiji will come with Hatori on his check-up. I have a feeling the energetic bunny wouldn't just sit by and not see his beloved Tooru. Also, I am definately waiting for the meeting between Hana-chan and the body guards. THat's something to see.
Ah, one warning note: careful of the extra characters you add. Too many new characters becomes a little difficult to remember. But i do love the new twist you put into Fruits Basket.
Please please please keep up your great work. Hoping you update soon. Chocolate and Onigiri for you if you do update .
| LibraryLady08 chapter 17 . 5/20/2008
I always enjoy your stories so much. It was a great update, I love this story and can't wait to see where it will go.
| The Fuzy Llama chapter 17 . 5/20/2008
Awesome! Its been so long since I've had a story alert in my inbox, and this totally made my day! _
I feel really bad for Yuki not getting to talk to Tooru, but it was a good thing to give Kyou and Shigure a chance. And this chapter gave me a lot of insight into the way Harada thinks... I never realised just how complicated security jobs were. Realism is definently something that makes your stories stand out. I mean, I honestly squirmed a bit when Chiaki thought Tooru was overweight because she looks so anorexically skinny in the manga, and the dancer girls seemed a bit rough with her, but that's how show business really is.
Drats... *scrunches up face* I'll probably have to wait at least another month to see Hatori's doctor visit... I'm too impatient for my own good. ; Can't wait to see the whole gang squeeze into Tooru's appartment on that Saturday she mentioned, so the sooner you update the better! Bye-bye means Ja-ne! (lol)
| sugar230 chapter 17 . 5/20/2008
Oh thank you, thank you, thank you! I don't know if you'd believe how excited I was to see that you'd updated! I love reading everything you write and I found myself getting a little sad as the scroll bar continued down the screen, not because the chapter wasn't amazing (because I absolutely loved it) but because I was running out of story :( I'm getting a little worried about Tohru though... I know it's hard to believe but I really hope she doesn't let herself get swept away with all that's going on. She's already starting to put off seeing Yuki and Kyo and it's scaring me :S I know you're really busy but I hope you can write more soon. I just can't wait to read more! I'm always hoping I'll see an update from you in my inbox, and when I do, it makes my week :) I imagine now I'll be re-reading all of Spotted! so I can properly place this new chapter, then I'll get addicted and go through your other stories as well ;p (for the 4th or 5th times) My favorite is Full Course because I'm just so excited about how those characters are developing but I love absolutely everything you write so please please please update soon. I'll be waiting :)
| Ange Noir chapter 17 . 5/20/2008
Yay an update! I love your stories so no matter how long the delay I'll read them for sure. can't wait for more! You really do the Furuba fandom justice. This chapter was delightfully long as well
| Enigma-Nemesis chapter 17 . 5/20/2008
Liked the new chapter, as usual, and I love how Tooru behaved on the Late Tonight Show! Hilarious XD
Hopefully after the morning show, we'll be able to see more regarding the whole Zodiac show (and how Tooru will contribute towards it).
Please update again soon!
| quixotomy chapter 1 . 5/20/2008
Holy christ you actually updated. Cool.
My major complaint is that you don't describe things enough, like how people look or sets or clothes, so I can't picture them in my head. At least try to include little thumbnail sketches or something, not just to fill out the introspective but add more depth.
| ChildlikeEmpress chapter 17 . 5/20/2008
Yay! I loved it! Tooru talking about the dance class was hilarious...and I winced along with the talk show hosts. Good thing Tooru is so naive lol. All that talk about wieners and sauasage...icky lol xD
| Arianna chapter 16 . 5/16/2008
Wow. So I read all of the chapters to this fic today and at the end when I click on the author's page I realize something very important. You also are the writer of Full Course which is one of my favorite Fruits Basket fanfics! Hopefully you'll update one of these two works sometime soon. Until then I'll just keep hoping.