Reviews for Spotted!
w- easy enough chapter 16 . 5/6/2008
I love your fic! All of the characters are in-character, and the relationships are so interesting! I really can't wait for more! Hope you update soon!
Rose Unspindle chapter 16 . 4/27/2008
Update soon please! It's been forever!
Maidenstear chapter 16 . 4/6/2008
The end of chapter 16 is really funny-when Yuki is waking upp. This is great! Please keep writing!
Purble chapter 16 . 3/31/2008
Hey! I just finished re-reading Spotted (again!). Am resisting re-reading the other two (not that long ago when I read them, many times).

Tooru is so cute, and I love the little inserts of humor (a nice balance to the drama). You show the need each of the characters have for one another in such a lovely manner. Your OC's are also very distinct and interesting; I'm very curious about them.

Uhm... Are you okay? You haven't updated any of your stories for awhile. Guess I'm just being anxious.

See ya
mreader chapter 16 . 3/25/2008


FORCING ME TO WATCH ENDLESS RERUNS OF INVADER ZIM (fantastic show... curse nickalodian for cancilling it :'( )

squeakee chapter 16 . 1/12/2008
my gosh this is funny, more please!
ChildlikeEmpress chapter 16 . 12/5/2007
WOW! I am a big fan of "Full Course" but had never tried reading your other fics, omg I was missing out! This fiction has to be the best most realistic intricate amazing Fruits Basket fic EVER. I know I will never find another story as exciting or well written. :D Please continue, this story is wonderful and I love every bit of it xD
destroying tokyo chapter 16 . 12/2/2007
I have to say that I really love this fic. It's hilarious and I'm excited to see where it's going. Also, I really enjoy your writing style.

I'm new to the Fruits Basket fandom (as in, over the last week I went through the manga and anime for the first time) and I'm really glad that the first fics I found were yours. It sets a high standard. :)

Also, I love the Gureru and Toriru on your other site.

Update soon, please.
sugar230 chapter 16 . 10/22/2007
This story is so amazing! Oh I cannot wait to read more! I know when the writing is this incredibly, amazingly good I'll have to be patient for another chapter but please please please update soon! You capture Tooru's character perfectly all the time! And I just know Harada's got a lot more affection for her than he shows. Please update soon I really can't wait to more!
rin-ren-ran chapter 16 . 10/22/2007
The story's no ordinary fic. The ideas are certainly 'outside the box.' I can't be sure if you did any research on the entertainment business, but this is convincing enough.

This chapter especially was my personal favourite. It reflected my memories of a hotel sleepover with my two older cousins on my last night visiting.

Although the style of writing gets annoying with dialogue talking in 3rd person (japanese language is quite strange), the story still has a unique kind of appeal.

I'll be eager to read the next chapter once it's out.
Kisa167 chapter 16 . 9/30/2007
Please update soon, I really enjoy you fanfic and i can't wait to see what happens!

Harada is a total jerk, I hope he dies. Shido is a sweety he should live. When is the amazing chapter in Tohrus life going to be over? Well update soon luv

Jynx chapter 16 . 9/14/2007
OMG! I TOTALLY love this story! This is so awesome! I've been reading your stories for some time now and I luv every one so far! I cannot wait for your next update! Please update soon!

He he he! Yuki beat Tohru's bodyguard up in his sleep! Some bodyguard! Yuki would be SO much better!

Hey! Since this keeps slipping into drama, will there be a pairing? If so, who will it be? I MUST know!
Tifa Tyndal chapter 15 . 9/8/2007
Aww! Sho is so nice! He's definitely one of my favorite people that have been introduced with the whole 'celebrity' thing. Great job on this chapter! I really enjoyed it! The lunch thing was so much like Tohru... it was so sweet! _ -Tifa Tyndal
Tifa Tyndal chapter 14 . 9/8/2007
Yay for cell phones! This chapter in particular was fun to read because it was so soft and half-easygoing. I enjoyed reading it very much. _ -Tifa Tyndal
Tifa Tyndal chapter 13 . 9/8/2007
Contracts, apartments, and bodyguards! Oh my!

I almost cried during this chapter as I read all that Tohru was going through. The poor girl. What a bother it must be to live like that. *sigh* I liked this chapter though! It was well written and developed the plot nicely. _ -Tifa Tyndal
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