|Reviews for Quietly and Secretly Wanting More|
| RoyalJamboree chapter 2 . 6/20/2011
Thank you so much for completeing the 1000 words challenge. Good job accomplishing such a tricky feat!
Of course, a picture of a moon just screams Remus, but I'm glad that you focused more on the other marauders and didn't go for the obvious cliche.
The only things I suggest you work on are keeping to one tense (i.e. past or present) and using correct punctuation/adding commas where commas need to be.
Other than that, good job, thank you, and I hope to see more this series soon!
| chipzixo chapter 1 . 10/26/2010
this was a lovely drabble :) and the song fits really well
LilyxSnape is always heartbreaking, and this is no different. Very sweet :)
Just watch out; sometimes your sentences sound a bit broken, like they don't really fit. But that's just me being picky :)
I enjoyed this :) Thanks for sharing.
| lonely hands chapter 1 . 10/23/2010
I like your use of lyrics and that it was Severus that Lily went to for comfort :3
It was very sad, but very sweet and left me quite heartbroken!
| The Fourth Black Sister chapter 1 . 10/18/2010
That was awesome. It was a quite interesting look on Lily and Severus' relationship. Great job! :D
| gecko brothers chapter 1 . 10/18/2010
Very cute and sad. There were a few grammar mistakes but other then that is was good. Keep up with the great work. :D Thank you for entering by the way :D
| Ouch Charlie chapter 1 . 10/18/2010
oh my, the emotions fit perfectly with the song...
i am in love with this story!
| opaque-girl chapter 1 . 10/18/2010
I rather enjoy Lily/Snape and this was extremly sweet.. aww :)