|Reviews for Tainted and sorrow|
| wenduo chapter 4 . 4/1/2014
Really loved this story but yeah beautiful but heartbreaking xD
| Senna Bluefire chapter 4 . 3/29/2014
Break died today. Im shocked, and Im sorry for the spoilers, but he just died in the manga right now. And the worst is, I cant stop crying. I already cried, when Elliot died, but this takes it to a whole new level. (
| guest chapter 4 . 3/29/2014
ow...ow..ow full of the latest retrace feels . you're so great ! it's so sad yet beautiful ...well I think that's what we've to do now. Break won't be happy if he sees us crying .
| Guest chapter 4 . 3/28/2014
That was beautiful. You're making me cry again. I can't tell if they're happy tears or sad tears though. I love the ending, especially with that last line. It's almost fitting, given the latest chapter.
I still don't think I'll be able to get over this until the series ends.
| Pervert Panda chapter 3 . 2/25/2014
You had me crying for three chapters long.
Why woul you do something like this QAQ
it's a great story.
But I'm not psychological ready for Break's death QAQ
| time2read chapter 4 . 8/17/2012
| Black-Moe chapter 4 . 5/11/2011
Wheres' the continuation? o_0 i wanna know nex next next happening please continue :3
| Katy Starcatcher chapter 4 . 12/20/2010
AT LAAAST YOU UPDATEEEDDD!
You tore me up in the morning... Never imagine they care...
Alice, I love your innocent way to cheer him up. I bet he is smiling down at you from heaven.
Oz-kun, I always know you care, although you never tell or show. You are the best! Probably you're now miss Break so much...
Gilbert, Oh Gilbert, I never thought you care. Indeed you're not a very good friend, But I reckon he'll laugh and say, 'You'll be useless if you stay around and cry your eyes out~.'
Sharon, don't worry... One day you'll meet him again. I bet he's sad when you cried, and sad when you're not there with him. Don 't worry, he'll be okay...
Besides, you all are his best friends!
| MirrorDede chapter 4 . 12/20/2010
Ah, I love it when writers make connections to things in the natural world…the seasons, the white flower…those were nice touches. And I liked Alice yelling and trying to "talk" to Break, even after he's gone. This nearly made me cry, too!
| MirrorDede chapter 3 . 12/20/2010
Yes it's true...when you look around the room and see things someone else touched, those memories come back. The things remind you of the person who is gone. So Gilbert's grief seemed quite real to me in that way. So sad...
| anonymous chapter 2 . 10/23/2010
I like your style of writing.
| Katy Starcatcher chapter 2 . 10/19/2010
AAAAA! AAAAAAA! AAAAAAAAAAAAA!
BREAK CANNOT DIE!
VERY NICE STORYYYYY! MAKE MORE! YOU ROOOOOCKK!
ALL GRIEVING FOR RIP BREAK
| Anonymouse chapter 2 . 10/19/2010
Such a painful story, i hope Sharons okaayy!
It stinks having break die, i cried when i read this..
make some more, i wanna see Gilberts reaction this time.
| Pholo chapter 1 . 10/18/2010
HURRY HURRY HURRY HURRY! D: I MUST KNOW NOW!
...poor Break... D':
| MirrorDede chapter 1 . 10/18/2010
I do so like your ideas. Like this detail about Break "He's done so much for everyone but himself." I'm glad you see it that way, because there is, in my opinion, a selflessness hidden inside his selfishness that not everyone sees.
This is a lovely line:
"darkness and silence were now his closes friends, as his real friends were in that light that was escaping him"
[but please change "closes" to "closest", mmm? and capitalize "Darkness" since it begins a sentence.]
Oh and "coup" should be "cope".
Waiting for more!