|Reviews for The White Phoenix|
| locutus chapter 1 . 3/5/2014
Interesting start... just wondering why didn't Hermione just apparate away? She had her wand and apparition was kind of instinctual for her...
| starlight-x-A-x chapter 2 . 1/10/2011
Really good start, I'm intrigued.
"I give you information and you save the world."
"Really? I save the world. Brilliant plan Malfoy, just fucking superb!" - Love those lines ;)
Hermiones right about Draco needing to change his appearance, but surely she should too? Shes very recognisable and an Undesirible, people are actively searching for her. :)
| elmoruthPotterfan6 chapter 1 . 10/18/2010
It's a very good start. I'm interested on reading more about what will happen next. Where would she hide? Would she see Draco again? Will he save her once more? Ooooh the excitement! :D
| DM. Chick chapter 1 . 10/18/2010
this is good