Reviews for My little secret
sparten976 chapter 10 . 10/21/2015
make a my little secret 2
binger25 chapter 10 . 5/10/2015
Love the ending and everything leading up to it.
Sk8rshark chapter 6 . 4/8/2015
While I am enjoying the actual plot. This story (And quite a few other DP fics for that matter) is completely devoid of contractions. You know, like I'm, I'll, won't, can't et cetera. Without contractions quite a bit of your dialogue sounds clunky and wooden. And not like something a human being would say. But that's just my opinion. Maybe there were some and I just didn't notice. Other than that it's fine. Just trying to help you make your story better.
Burke23 chapter 10 . 4/4/2015
Yay they're alive... kinda.
Burke23 chapter 9 . 4/2/2015
Okay... what just happened?
Burke23 chapter 8 . 4/1/2015
Somewhere out there, Ember is singing DANCING IN THE MOONLIGHT.

Well now they know, and knowing is half of the battle. G.I. JOE!
Burke23 chapter 7 . 3/30/2015
Clones, why did it have to be clones? Great chapter bra.
Burke23 chapter 6 . 3/28/2015
Well... this just got complicated.
Burke23 chapter 5 . 3/26/2015
Danny let loose his inner Spider-man.
Burke23 chapter 4 . 3/24/2015
Okay, the title of the chapter matches the contents.
Burke23 chapter 3 . 3/23/2015
Burke23 chapter 2 . 3/22/2015
Well, that happened.
Burke23 chapter 1 . 3/22/2015
For the record, I don't know what r&r meand in this context. But I digress, I liked this first chapter.
Guest chapter 10 . 2/9/2015
luv it!
DA-999 chapter 1 . 1/3/2015
Please more Danny x Kitty
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