Reviews for The Occluded Soul
NCIS248 chapter 20 . 11/22
Gods... That's actually like the fifth time I've read your story. And it's as incredible as it was the first time! The Soul magic is so beautifully introduced, explained, ect. and the entire story is so coherent, it could have been the real thing! O.o I love the way the Grangers and Snape interact, it was hilarious, sweet, sad and everything in between
The whole is just mind blowing! So thank you for sharing it
Lizpin chapter 20 . 11/12
I've just found this and absolutely loved it! Thank you for sharing it!
RandomObsessionsOfMine chapter 20 . 11/4
well, this is cute.
RandomObsessionsOfMine chapter 5 . 11/4
Nooooooooo Draco. . .
PinkHanon chapter 16 . 10/30
I think this is the best named chapter ever...
LJKBananagirl chapter 20 . 10/24
Words literally fail me, that was an incredible read. Again. I really am amazed at your imagination. Just wonderful. Thank you.
Deb chapter 20 . 10/14
Brilliant! I've really enjoyed this. Thank you.
Jessie Deal chapter 20 . 10/7
This was an amazing story. So many parts of it were awesome: the inner workings of Severuses mind, the way feelings going through the soul bond made Hermione and Severus act. It was very thought out and I really respect that kind of details. Very well done. Thank you so much. Read it without stopping from chapter 2 onwards. When there is such a great story everything else must wait :)
TPalesh chapter 20 . 8/28
Simply incredible. Thank you for making me add another amazing story to one of my to HGSS favs. You've done a great job. The characters are authentic; the plot does not progress too fast; the exotic scenes are not written cheap (gods, they're just hot *blushesand well... This story is just perfect. Love it, how you described those two possible futures severus sees (nice way to hide the original story... Much better your idea, my heart still Bleeds when I think about the shrieking shack scene). Lots or hugs, for making me giggle, worry, cry, and perform happy dances while I read your amazing story. Well done!
TPalesh chapter 12 . 8/28
Gods, this is beautiful in a strange sense. The way you decide his soul... His different personalities. Just beautiful.
TPalesh chapter 7 . 8/28
*giggles* An election-on-demand... Whew, not bad... I absolutely love the Grangers... You display them very authentic... Looking forward to the following chapters. :D
mshccs chapter 20 . 7/17
i love SS-HG pairings... I've come across this story many times while I was searching for fics to read but for some reason or another, I always skipped reading this... i want you to know that finally reading your story is one of the best decisions that I've ever done... I soooo love everything about it, from the storyline, to the interactions of the characters, to the setting, to the portrayal of their relationship, gaaaah! your an amazing writer and I really felt how mione and sevvie were suffering at the beginning... I'm almost sorry that it ended... Severus Snape rocks! i say that. they really would not have won the war if not for him! whether insane or not, he wreaked devastation to the DE ranks... amazing! and he's sooo protective of the grangers... when i finished reading, I immediately went to your profile and there I saw that you also wrote the story An Unwritten Future, its also one of the fics that i love... did somebody tell you that you are a bloody amazing writer? pls continue writing new stories... i really love SS/HG, LM/HG, DM/HG, and TR-LV/HG pairings... YOU ROCK! :D
kaida171 chapter 4 . 7/10

I don't wanna fly anymore, make the plane land! TT-TT
rebeccakelsey chapter 20 . 6/22
A really enjoyable and believable story. Thank you for taking the time to write it. I'm glad he was able to let Lilly go in the end.
Dimplz chapter 20 . 6/18
This was the first Soul Bond fic I've read featuring Severus and Hermione. Most of their fics are time-turner, marriage law, student/teacher, or co-workers. I really enjoyed it! It's nice reading something different. I enjoyed the inclusion of her parents and am glad Ron and Harry were understanding. The names of her parents that I see most often are Roger and Helen. Thanks for writing. :)
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