|Reviews for The Occluded Soul|
| JeniDRalph chapter 9 . 3/8/2012
I'm so glad he saved them.
| JeniDRalph chapter 8 . 3/8/2012
I like how you have him trying to keep the pieces of his soul together, but with a different intent than Voldemort.
| JeniDRalph chapter 6 . 3/8/2012
Crookshanks will forgive her.
| JeniDRalph chapter 5 . 3/8/2012
I am really enjoying this universe. (I don't like tomatoes, either... go Severus!)
| JeniDRalph chapter 3 . 3/8/2012
I hope she starts keeping her wand with her.
| JeniDRalph chapter 2 . 3/8/2012
I wonder if the "Law Firm" is the trigger to awakend Dumbledore...
| JeniDRalph chapter 1 . 3/8/2012
Wow! This is fascinating!
| bethanysb chapter 20 . 3/5/2012
Completely brilliant and beautifully written. Think this is the only fanfic I've read where I might prefer the 'final battle' scene to the original, the soul shield was magnificent. And I adore your snape and hermione :) thank you.
| etherian chapter 20 . 3/4/2012
A dear friend recommended your story to me and I am so pleased that she did. I have spent a week (a very difficult week health-wise) reading your story. It has been a joy, a sadness, frightful at times, but most of all your writing transported me into their world where I was able to escape mine for awhile.
Thank you for your lovely story.
| kitty-gurl1 chapter 20 . 3/1/2012
another completely amazing fic! such a sweet tale of healing, dependence and dreams
| Costerboster chapter 20 . 2/18/2012
Some of the descriptions in the story made me cry... if only all the stories I come across were this earth-shattering...
| her illusion chapter 20 . 2/16/2012
i have to say,3 days? is not a pairing i usually read(i go for draco/hermione)& this is in fact only the 2nd story i've read with this pairing,but i think its really well done :) wish draco hadn't died though.&the pink coat part was really cute hehe.
| Montara chapter 20 . 2/13/2012
I loved your story with all the ups and downs. I'm just glad you finished it with them remaining together and not having to lose their connection. Thank you!
| callalily32 chapter 20 . 2/11/2012
aww. Such a good ending to such a great story! I can't imagine how this wonderful work of fanfiction has escaped me for so long! You do such a great job of the characterization of everyone - especially Snape. I was a little worried about what I would think of him when his "cannon" personality returned after the first half's events, but you did a wonderful job of keeping him in character, and it made sense with the rest of your story as well.
I loove Hermione's parents. Fics with them are so much fun because there are so many possibilities, and I love how they are main characters here. Speaking of possibilities... I also love how you skewed cannon beyond belief and yet made it entirely believable! Fantastic story; thanks for the great read. :)
| LittleFoxChild chapter 20 . 2/7/2012
It was a good story but i don't think it had what it takes to make it for them to get married yet. It was a very good read.