Reviews for The Occluded Soul
Hopeful-z chapter 5 . 2/7
Hopeful-z chapter 3 . 2/7
It looks so promising
Guest chapter 1 . 2/2
I so loved the way u described how ripped apart snape was while switching between two personalities for such a long time! That he's certainly not the good guy a lot of ff authors wish him to be.
Enid an Gleanna chapter 20 . 1/30
I loved this story! It was mysterious and intriguing. Gripping and emotional. But sometimes also funny, mostly thanks to Grangers. I liked their portrayal here very much, in most of the fics they are either nonexistent (like in books), or dead, victims, clueless. But in that story they had interesting personalities and played an important role. For example, loved John "cheating" at poker and trying to give Severus intimidating "If you hurt my daughter..." talk, Helen encouraging Hermione to bring home a boy or a girl or whatever, her scheme with rats, reminding Severus to save himself and not to kill anyone. I liked the plot and concept of Soul Magic and Horcruxes, getting revealed to us slowly, and Hermione's encounters with different aspects of Snape. And of course I liked the final outcome, it was sad to see Draco go, but I'm glad that Severus(of course) and Remus made it to the end, as in original books I was always furious that my my two favourite characters after Hermione are killed off, even though I saw reasons behind it. But hey, what is fanfiction for! Definitely for great authors giving us awesome alternative stories :)
Phyllidia chapter 20 . 1/23
Aww that was lovely. Thank you.
Guest chapter 20 . 1/20
katetastic chapter 20 . 1/14
I just spent my entire day reading this story. I'm so in love that there are no words. It is magnificent. So in character and so so lovely.
sasa chapter 20 . 1/3
I love your Severus!
He's adorable, a hot bad ass, and protective bitter man.
But I love him anyways...
Hats off to you my friend!
sasa chapter 9 . 1/3
I have to give it to you...
That was hot!
sasa chapter 7 . 1/3
Ooooh hahahaa! That was something surely!
SnapeBrailleforThankYou chapter 20 . 12/27/2015
The image of John carrying Severus absolutely did me in. What a wonderful story. Yet another! *happy sigh*
well.scrubbed.rube chapter 1 . 12/20/2015
Wow! That was very... interesting! I can't wait to continue reading!
deedeebug chapter 13 . 12/8/2015
Even after reading this several times I still laugh out loud!
deedeebug chapter 10 . 12/8/2015
I just love it!
deedeebug chapter 7 . 12/8/2015
I have read this too many times to count and I love this story, it has to be one of my all time favs. You are so talented!
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