|Reviews for The Occluded Soul|
| Eru no Tsubasa chapter 1 . 2/22/2013
Oh no! Poor Snape...
| SexySloth chapter 17 . 2/21/2013
Oh gods this story is amazing. I would pay a pretty penny to see just how your fantastic brain works! Can't wait for the rest.
| Aisha04 chapter 20 . 2/21/2013
Enchanting story. You had me hooked.
| thenextbookworm chapter 11 . 2/7/2013
No, no. I think drunk is exactly how they hit those notes. Drunk enough, and any screech sounds like music, right? Haha, I don't even know the tune to Star Spangled Banner. I love Canada's national anthem... .
| Kissmegorgous chapter 19 . 1/24/2013
Second time I've read this and still amazing!
Such a different story, really great I love the animal instinct in Severus ]
| eadie chapter 20 . 1/17/2013
Love the story
| JstDani chapter 20 . 1/7/2013
This is one of the best SS/HG that I've read in ages. It was beautiful! The way you described Snape was perfect and I loved the dynamic not only between Hermione and her parents but her parents and Snape. Simply awesome!
| Kissmegorgous chapter 20 . 1/4/2013
This was awesome!
Loved it heaps great suspense and loved this type of Severus!
Nice to see this character of hermione not pushed around :)
| yay chapter 17 . 12/23/2012
This is such a dysfunctional relationship, but it's so entertaining.
| yay chapter 13 . 12/23/2012
I'm confused...did he rape her or not?
| KarenDetroit chapter 4 . 12/6/2012
Well, you certainly did throw it all away...it makes a much more interesting story, to be sure. The idea that actions have consequences, that magic is a two-edged sword, that morality exists; these are all concepts that eluded JKR.
| Lil'MissChris chapter 20 . 11/28/2012
D'aaaaaaw -tearing up- Many many things I'd like to admit after reading this story.
Firstly, it's got to be one of the most enjoyable Hermione/Severus stories I've read in a very long time! I love the journey of their souls intertwining.
Secondly, and ironically the part I enjoyed the most. You gave Hermione a sense of family that is very uncommon. The books speak little about the Grangers, and often in fanfictions, they are written as distant characters who have little time for their daughter.
I fully enjoyed the fact that you gave Hermione this close bond with her family. It often brought a smile to my face to see the dialogue between them, especially Helen's witty and amusing comments. I often let out a giggle at the amusing conversations and jokes. Also, by making Hermione's family so close, I like to think it also gave Severus an opportunity to have that which he never got from his own parents growing up.
Thirdly, the sex was beautiful. Hands down, was very emotional and I thought it was well done.
I look forward to reading more from you in the future.
| MoonShadowAMR chapter 20 . 11/3/2012
I don't know if I wrote any review to any of your other stories, so I'll just let it out here. I love them all. You're a wonderful writer, I don't think I ever enjoyed a story like I did yours, for a week now I've been with the phone in my hands, and my eyes on the text, my husband tried to take it from me yesterday and I went bersek. You have unique ideas for your stories and that makes them even more entailing. Once i got entangled amongst the lines I could't escape...would't actually. Keep writing, every minute of the day is worth spent reading. MoonShadowAMR.
| takeawaymyimagination chapter 20 . 10/30/2012
Among your stories I think this is one of the best! God gave you a beautiful and creative mind and thank you, for sharing it with us! I loved every bit of Snape here, he's just him! And of course, the Grangers were all so adorable! Keep writing!
| Liddl15 chapter 20 . 10/29/2012
OMG! This is DEFINITELY one of my favourite Hermione/Snape fanfics I've read and I like to think that means a lot because I've read hundreds. The idea was beautifully original, the plot lovely, realistic and most importantly for me personally, not too fast. A lot of fanfictions develop so quickly you wonder how it all happened. But here, everything happened 'all in good time' and I was able to transform along with all the characters. Your sense of humour is absolutely splendid as well! 3
Definitely a story I will come back to read at some point. Thank you very much for this pleasurable experience! 3