Reviews for The Occluded Soul
brandon279 chapter 2 . 10/19/2010
what has happened that night?

killing voldemort twice is more than Dumbeldore, the ministry, the order and Harry potter combined. (they killed him once in the whole story after so much sacrifices and that once was due to invincible wand not the spell caster ability).

anyway, now we have an answer to Severus's question in book six "what about my soul, Albus?".
snapelovesme chapter 2 . 10/19/2010
aww poor severus, i hope she finds him soon :D [my inbox needs to be invaded!]
Golfbabe87 chapter 2 . 10/19/2010
Alas, here is the bribe you requested haha. Interesting chapter. Did you know in Iceland there are absolutely no homeless people? No, seriously! My friend is from Iceland and she says the government pays for living conditions when you can't afford it. Their definition of poor is not having a tv or cell phone. However, the country is bankrupt... The firstt ime my friend saw a homeless man was when she was living in San Francisco with me. Hermione's mum and dad are funny, that was very clever of her dad to think of using the glasses. Her mother...ahaha. I guess she she'll take either a daughter in-law of son -in-law at this point. lol
MollysSister chapter 2 . 10/19/2010
The swing seat was still warm! ACK! No wonder Harry is in fits about missing him. How deliciously taunting.

Chapter one mentioned that Mr. Smith had several sticks, did he take multiple sticks with him when he apperated or just Alecto’s? Im not surprised he is using Alecto’s wand. Seems like at the moment when his soul was rending the dark side was winning. Thusly he would need a dark wizard’s wand.

So what sort of bond did he create with Hermione at the time his soul was rend? Obviously his box of darkness took over if he is considered a “mass murderer” Then again he only killed the bad guys so perhaps there is still some good leaking out? I enjoyed the symmetry of Hermione feeling a malaise and Snape recovering from his surgery. Please keep HG in touch with her parents. I like the way she shares whats going on in her life with them.

I am horrified that the war with Voldy still isn’t resolved. ( I mean that as a compliment. You get it right?)

2 chapters a day? SCORE!
Teddy Radiator chapter 2 . 10/19/2010
As usual, you leave your audiences screaming for more. Can't you just send the whole thing to me so I can devour it all at once? I'm just such an instant gratification type of gal. But then again, what would I do after I finished it and nothing was in the queue? Oh, you are so wickedly wonderful.

Totally hooked and HG and SS haven't even given each other smouldering looks yet. You're amazing.
HE5972 chapter 2 . 10/19/2010
Very clever with the 3-D glasses!
lillybelle76 chapter 2 . 10/19/2010
I have two chocolate chip cookies, a Dove dark chocolate bar, and if its a really long chapter, a Toblerone. All for you. Consider yourself bribed. Really great work so far. I wish I had half your talent.
snapelovesme chapter 1 . 10/19/2010
what magic is this? A brand new story from my favourite Snanger writer? Oh My!

VirgenQueen chapter 1 . 10/19/2010
Your Snap is so interesting I want to know why he would let those muggles keep him in the hospital for so long. He must have had a true break down. I hope that Inspector's don't hurt him. The stick part is still cracking me up. Please update today.
Plumbum chapter 1 . 10/19/2010
So they are still after him? He had no chance to explain his motivations? Dumbledore's portrait didn't defend him?
MollysSister chapter 1 . 10/19/2010
Im not seeing any of the funny yet. Its chilling rather, especially the part where Severus does the AK with the wrong emotions and realizes it! Oh the boxes!

I am happy that KS and HP are now tracking him. Is he using his wand?

Looks like Evil!snape escaped from the phyisos. Rut row
Notnahtanha chapter 1 . 10/19/2010
Oho. I do like stories that explore magical possibilities like this, because I am a colossal geek and the pseudo-science engages me to a really quite sad extent. notifications have become little gems to get me through to the end of semester thanks to you, even with the commas

(footnote: well, if I had a html fail, hopefully you still get the gist)
MarthaRRLeBlanc chapter 1 . 10/19/2010
Awesome Start to a New Beginning! Severus is so powerful even when down, and I can't wait to read how he gets out of this scrape he's got himself into.
jeshika.23 chapter 1 . 10/19/2010
Oooh intense beginning. Love it :)
Golfbabe87 chapter 1 . 10/19/2010
You never cease to amaze me with your originality. You have a tendency to pull your readers in within the first few paragraphs. A very new development, I am intrigued to see where this story leads and what happened after Severus killed Dumbledore. I feel the same about after the sixth book, I tend to pretend most of the seventh book didn't happen. I am excited that you will be updated a lot this month, but also sad knowing the the inevitable will come...aka no updates in November. Oh well, I love your writing and thank you for the many wonderful updates this month!
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