Reviews for Betrayal
Nicolas Nicky chapter 2 . 2/27/2017
Nooo did you stop writing the story I want to know how it ends :(.
I like to read your stories especially obi and assaj, I hope that in some moment the ends although it was a long time ago I think ..
thump chapter 2 . 2/2/2016
more please?
Darksnider05 chapter 2 . 12/25/2015
It's been a pleasure reading all your Obi/Ventress stories a shame it seems you've stopped writing them.

Either way thanks for the sweet stories.
SneakyThorongil chapter 2 . 7/10/2015
I always loved the ambiguous relation ship between obi-wan and ventress thanks for this !
Kennayil chapter 2 . 9/23/2014
Dooku always struck me as what a Sith should really be. Use of the Dark Side is okay, but getting lost in it, that is the Great Sin. It was always his intelligence and charisma that made him truly dangerous.

Asajj/Obi-Wan will always be my favorite couple, and I hope you are able to finish this one day.
Brightknight chapter 2 . 5/9/2013
Another good start from your pen, you should elaborate and update
imnotraven16 chapter 2 . 4/12/2012
please go on
Kara Alen chapter 2 . 3/16/2012
This looks like a start of avery nice story, please, continue :D
ejm12 chapter 2 . 11/18/2011
oooh! please update soon!
RKF22 chapter 2 . 8/18/2011
great update cant wait for more
NeonColourFox chapter 2 . 7/14/2011
Oh. My. God. I'm starting to fell pity for Ventress. Oh, God.
NeonColourFox chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
Intresting pairing. :) You got my attention!
Wings-Make-Everything-Better chapter 2 . 7/12/2011
Wow! Such a good follow up chapter! Can't wait for the next chapter! XD
Terra Young chapter 2 . 6/25/2011
Very good!
General Maraxus chapter 2 . 6/25/2011
Beautiful... you are truly skilled with incredible skills to create such a piece of writing. I'm in love with this story and I look forward to the next piece
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