Reviews for Betrayal |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Nooo did you stop writing the story I want to know how it ends :(. I like to read your stories especially obi and assaj, I hope that in some moment the ends although it was a long time ago I think .. |
![]() ![]() ![]() more please? |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's been a pleasure reading all your Obi/Ventress stories a shame it seems you've stopped writing them. Either way thanks for the sweet stories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I always loved the ambiguous relation ship between obi-wan and ventress thanks for this ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dooku always struck me as what a Sith should really be. Use of the Dark Side is okay, but getting lost in it, that is the Great Sin. It was always his intelligence and charisma that made him truly dangerous. Asajj/Obi-Wan will always be my favorite couple, and I hope you are able to finish this one day. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another good start from your pen, you should elaborate and update |
![]() ![]() ![]() please go on |
![]() ![]() ![]() This looks like a start of avery nice story, please, continue :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() oooh! please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() great update cant wait for more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh. My. God. I'm starting to fell pity for Ventress. Oh, God. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Intresting pairing. :) You got my attention! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! Such a good follow up chapter! Can't wait for the next chapter! XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful... you are truly skilled with incredible skills to create such a piece of writing. I'm in love with this story and I look forward to the next piece |