|Reviews for Maelstrom's Road|
| Kyuri26 chapter 10 . 6/14
Great story. Keep up the good work and please don't let your stories fade out like other writers have.
| Darkcrest27 chapter 10 . 1/30
great story its a shame after so long w/o being updated its unlikely to be resumed one of those stories you want to see finished
| Noctus Of The Thousand Blades chapter 5 . 10/5/2015
okay, I know this is likely an exercise in futility given when this was last updated, but I felt I should point out some things. first, Rika is NOT a gravity child. she was born 100% human. she later became a Brain Charger due to Sora brain washing her. Ikki... well all we have with him is speculation. it is suspected that he might be a gravity child, but there is no proof one way or the other. he could also be human, but as before there is no way to know for certain.
just needed to vent a bit. I don't expect a response. but I wouldn't mind one, or an update to this.
| JensenDaniels32 chapter 4 . 8/19/2015
Not Justus? Well thanks for wasting hours of my time for nothing...not.
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/14/2015
i hope you die torturedvand raped to death you worthless microbe
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/26/2014
Anytime I see "Sasuke-Teme" or anything similar to that, I feel like I'm going to start foaming at the mouth and have a seizure. Teme doesn't mean bastard, if that's what you're going for, in fact I'm certain it doesn't mean anything close to whatever you're thinking. It essentially means "you". Even then, that's not entirely true, as it's an aggressive form of addressing somebody, and can only be used when talking to that person specifically. Theme is not to be used as an honorific, otherwise it's legitimately nonsense, and anyone speaking japanese would look at you strangely. So please bear that in mind, and if you could, send out a memo or something, because people really need to grasp this concept. Otherwise, good work.
| Biblio388 chapter 1 . 10/17/2014
Interesting start to the story. I don't really have a problem with the POV as long as it is well written and doesn't switch around a lot. Can't wait to read more of this story.
| ShadowFireZelda chapter 1 . 9/18/2014
A1 is all important. A1 is not just a steak sauce, but a meat and other various things sauce! It is definitely the Sauce of the gods.
| Beast Mode92 chapter 4 . 8/2/2014
it took over three chapters for what seems like a prologue
| Blood D. Cherry chapter 10 . 5/14/2014
update again bro?
| dispassioneight chapter 4 . 5/10/2014
I sort of thought that Naruto would wake up, that 'Konoha' was just a dream while he as in the Gravity Children lab. But alternate dimensions is cool too. Not quite as seamless, but still cool.
| dispassioneight chapter 3 . 5/10/2014
That's a pretty slick tie in there, good crossways.
| Uraharaisgod chapter 3 . 4/29/2014
So, when Naruto was sealed, his alternate fell into a coma?
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/21/2014
Ok i'm going to be really harsh in this message but you need to know. First off this fan-fiction is extremely boring.. at first. However, it does pick up pace around the end of chapter 3. Second this is way to long and drawn out. It needs to pick up speed faster. Do not spend the first 3 chapters recounting the anime i'm sorry but i'm sure everyone knows what happened in the anime you don't need to retell it. If they do not know the anime then they can go look it up and watch the episodes. Retelling what happened in the anime is a waste of your time so basically the first three chapters excluding the ending of chapter 3. Finally this does not feel like a crossover between air gear and naruto. It feels like a written out version of the anime with no difference in the first 3 chapters which im guessing contain at least 12,000 words each. I'm sorry but my advice redo or put it on hiatus. This just isn't written right it's too naruto heavy it shows no signs of air gear in the first 3 chapters out of 10. However, I would not say this is a terrible fanfiction just needs to be redone.
| Uzumaki-sama011 chapter 1 . 11/20/2013
damn, that memorie is great.
Ina years time i will be writting a certain fic, and i would like to use that memori.