Reviews for Naruto: Ultimate swordsman
Guest chapter 3 . 1/26
when Naruto and his wife had move home when in it Naruto had buy out a cub home in time when one of the old homes on his mom and dad old 1 home had be took out when the fox had get out and Naruto know he not get the 1 home buit back up the home was when the his own sel kakashi and his old tema had woking in as ninjas as will some time Naruto and temle had put 4 cub bed rooms in ,when in town Naruto find the old 2 hand shop he was in ,find some good cothers and some bed shleff too ,his cub bed room was on the gound floor with art of starfox and his wilfe and kids too on it , some time Naruto had his own office in the old sley of smp art and some bar too ,
Quillion9000 chapter 10 . 1/27
I know this is an old story, but it's pretty damn amazing.
okhuj chapter 22 . 1/27
Since the redhead is his older sister and the house was left by their parents for them that means its not just narutos house but legally hers too. He shouldn't be treating her like she is a guest when its actually her home too she can pretty much do what she wants
Miles Uchimaki chapter 13 . 11/26/2016
You keep alternating from Sasori to Deidara then back again and it is a bit confusing
Miles Uchimaki chapter 13 . 11/26/2016
You have already written that Sasori knows that they had an antidote to the poison
Miles Uchimaki chapter 8 . 11/25/2016
you named kakashis sword raging storm
Miles Uchimaki chapter 6 . 11/25/2016
Tsunades summons is a slug called Katsuya
Guest chapter 1 . 10/18/2016
The first few lines were vomit inducing. I can't move past them. Goodbye.
Natsubi chapter 24 . 7/27/2016
Nagatos rinnegan was an implanted rinnegan that belonged to madara
Natsubi chapter 16 . 7/27/2016
Dude, Taka means Hawk
Shiro means white
Natsubi chapter 9 . 7/27/2016
i feel like ive read this book before, but its not in my community like all the other books i read, if i got past the first chapter anyway, strange right?
Natsubi chapter 7 . 7/27/2016
NOOOOOO!
I HATE SAKURA! CANT YOU JUST KILL HER OFF?
thats all, thank you for your time
(and yes, i know the story is already done and has a sequel)
Natsubi chapter 4 . 7/27/2016
the girl is probably karin or tayuya
Jared51 chapter 13 . 7/26/2016
Being on a team made naruto weak, he should handle both of them easily
Monster King chapter 25 . 7/24/2016
Great story you really did a good job writing this and besides Danzo, the elders and certain others you didn't bash a lot of charectors which I liked good choices for Naruto's wives also and the crossovers were good all in all good job writing this.
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