Reviews for Part Of Your World
Guest chapter 19 . 12/28/2014
Very disprespectful...i cant believe they would disrespect his parents like that in their own home...if they didnt look like little whores before they sure do now.
Guest chapter 16 . 12/28/2014
She is selfish and all i hear from her is me me me...his family needs him but to her she is more important...has she ever thought of becoming amish for him?
Guest chapter 15 . 12/28/2014
Geez she really comes off as pathetic...doesnt she worry that he will resent her later on in life?
Annalamode chapter 22 . 5/16/2014
The premise, the plot, the love and understanding, the kicking a $ of LOVE enemies, ALL OF IT.
Guest chapter 20 . 3/16/2014
Ummmm nowhere in there did he say show me. He said he wanted to know but I never saw show me. It's really crappy when people give up their parents. She needs to comfort Edward not the other way around. Plus umm they aren't acting that innocent in his parents home.
harkie5 chapter 24 . 11/25/2013
Great story! I really enjoyed it.
harkie5 chapter 9 . 11/24/2013
Cute story so far, I'm excited to see what happens next.
cheltivia chapter 24 . 8/3/2013
Lovely story
Sharla12 chapter 24 . 6/17/2013
This story was really awesome. Thank you.
rjh1960 chapter 24 . 2/12/2013
Thanks for writing and especially for coming back to finish. It's a cute story and I look forward to reading how their lives work out.
gmb7064 chapter 2 . 1/18/2013
great chapter
gmb7064 chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
Enjoyed the first chapter :)
AddyD90 chapter 24 . 1/9/2013
Loved it... Just saw your story today but if it finish you should change it from in progress to completed... Off to read the sequel now
Guest chapter 24 . 12/8/2012
Love love love
amberkey chapter 24 . 12/6/2012
Yayayay! I'm so glad you're deciding to do a sequel! I just found this story the other day and was insanely hooked
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