Reviews for Never Thought
BrokenSofia chapter 3 . 8/15/2011
HERE I PRESENT THEE WITH THY COOKIE OF THY CHOICE!

Loved it!

And you have a great way with words when it comes to poems!

LOVE YOU GABY!

AND I ENJOYED READING YOUR WORK! 33333

Loves, BrokenSofia
TheSecretReader94 chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
hey!

is there a reason why Paul is mentioned first of the pack... lol i know the obsession! lol

GOd, the pack sound so sexy! good job! ;p

"he'd always known how to deal with Leah." this is really sweet, you can almost see the join between them! they sound so close!

Leah sounds the best big sister! she sounds so protective! so cute! lol

hahahaha typical Jacob! drawing in the red paint! lol

aww so cute! Jacob, babe i love you! haha

aww this is so cute! i am going to continue this later!

Leahxxx
Insane Cali Gurl chapter 3 . 10/28/2010
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

That was such an excellent ending I thought for sure she was running away for good! But she didn't! Nothing alittle love confession won't cure.
Insane Cali Gurl chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:( Awww man!

Poor Jakey!
wolfsbane92 chapter 3 . 10/21/2010
AHHHH SO SWEET! I am being overcome by a sugar coma from the sweetness of this chapter. :D WOOHOO!

You wrote the poem yourself? It's really beautiful! I like the part that says, "Never thought I'd see shooting stars, Just by looking into your eyes. Nothing could be more perfect, than the feeling shared by you and I." -sob- So pretty! (TwT)Ahh, seeing shooting stars in Jake's eyes. Leah has got it good. XD Agh I'm so jealous of their love! Dangit, I want a fictional boyfriend too! Or at least a real one that's good like Jake! DX -sigh- wishful thinking...okay enough ranting. I REALLY like this little story, it was cute and sweet and made me feel warm and fuzzy. :)
wolfsbane92 chapter 2 . 10/21/2010
BAHAHAHA! Leah hoping Seth and Jake were having a fling cracked me up. XD

Aw Leah honey I know how you feel. :( Getting dumped for another girl is the worst! I wish I could give her a hug! At least she has Jake to give her hugs. :) Lol Seth is so cute!

Go Leah go! Find Jakey and throw yourself at him because you deserve to be loved homegirl! Go go! XD
wolfsbane92 chapter 1 . 10/21/2010
Awww, poor Jake. Don't worry Jake! Even if Leah doesn't love you, I'll love you forever and ever! :D I really like how you let Leah be sort of vulnerable around Jake. Like when she said she wanted to be fine now instead of in the future. I just thought that was really sweet. :)
Jacobleah chapter 3 . 10/20/2010
Beautiful and incredibly sweet love story of friendship, patience, hope and loving someone so fully inside and out. Bravo!
f4life chapter 3 . 10/19/2010
OH MY GOSH GABY! ABSOLUTELY AMAZING! It blew me away! Jakey, my Jakey, you made him so sweet, just the way we love him. And Leah? Aw Leah, you know I love how you write about her :)

It was brilliant! I flew through it, it was amazing. And the poem? The poem was FAB! You're great at writing poems.

Thanks for this lovely story xxx
brankel1 chapter 3 . 10/19/2010
I love it coming.
hgmsnoopy chapter 3 . 10/19/2010
Awww, this was great!
hilja chapter 3 . 10/18/2010
Aw, this is so sweet. Thanks for writing this.
hilja chapter 2 . 10/18/2010
Aw, Seth's a great little brother, who's growing up to be such a great man,able to help his sister see right from wrong.
hilja chapter 1 . 10/18/2010
This is so cute, little Jake is adorable and 9-yo Leah funny.

Loved Seth's enthusiams when Jake told him he had told Leah how he felt. Lol!
gone1.gone2.gone3 chapter 3 . 10/18/2010
...wow...

I was going to cry but i made myself hold them in so i could see clearly to continue reading LoL.

I loved the wholeeee thing! Thanks for writing this awsome story and the poem was, as always, awsome! ;)

Jake as always is the sweet hearted hot guy and i wish i had a guy like him...but dont we all? LoL.

But this time there was no Paul...:( hahaa

Lots of love, Merry! ;D
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