Love it, love it, love it!
/Belker

Girl. I just love you so. I meant it.

The story is well-written and definitely leaves a great impact. I love the bubbly, cutesy feeling that it brings and whooosh, your writing skill. Appropriate spacing and neat, smooth story's flow. The story is light and comforting, and you described their relationship just the way I imagine it'd be. The story is good enough someone oblivious to the fandom can still read it and believes Steve and Danny's relationship is canon. Wonderful, wonderful job.

Also, the strip poker part kills. I love Chin and Kono so bad, and once again, I love the way you describe them here.

Keep up the good work!

Love,
Your Anon Reader.

Hi there!
This is a truly wonderful story. Makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside _
Hope you are still writing somewhere out there!
By the way, I also love your zomby apocalypse fanfiction and would be ecstatic if you continued that
Aloha from Germany

This is lovely. You have the guys down so well and their relationship/not relationship going so well. I did wonder if they would finally admit they are married, but I guess it doesn't really matter, as Steve figured out.

Oh, gawd, the fluff.

I think I just died of the fluffiness. Is it weird that I may have sobbed a bit near the end?

Mostly because I didn't want this to end and partly because I know this won't ever happen in canon and exists to feed my feels but also to torment my fangirl heart? They don't even do 'how long you guys been married?' jokes on Hawaii five-0 anymore (so far this season 3. Last one I remember was when Lori and the guys went on horseback in season 2)... *sighes*...

Anyway, this was just awesome and incredibly well written. I loved every word of it.

This is definately the most adorable story I've ever read. You capture them so well!

I think I had a big goofy grin on my face 99% of the time it took me to read this story. Great job and thank you for sharing!

(:

*chuckle* Favourite parts: Kono going "Oh, crap, didn't mean to sic Steve on Taylor!" - Grace and the wedding topic - Mary and the wedding planning - Cold feet.
XD Well done!

Oh man, I would like to read more...

OMG, I loved it from the beginning to the very end! These are like the things could be, really. And they actually are xD I always say they quarrel like a married couple :)
Thank you for such a great fanfic!

Love this

Out of an awesome story that made me laugh a lot, this is my favorite line: 'Basically, what it comes down to is that Steve offered to share his bed with Danny and somehow that just sort of led to them living together. Because that's how they roll.' That sums it up perfectly.

Oh and the 'Danno, can I have a penguin?' bit was fun.

dragonlover44

Great!

...Except for the lack of sex, of course. :) Great work!

(( "Is it weird that I heard that as, 'I'm concerned about my husband's wellbeing so I'm going to go check up on him and make sure he's doing alright'?" Kono asks as they watch Steve head to his office. ))
- oh yeah! thats just great! whats in a word . . . lol

(( "I hate him in a totally loving way." ))
- that, clearly is the BEST ever! its perfectly fitting those two

i really love this fic, the only sad drop is that they didnt got their crap together in it *cant help the mcdanno favoring*

but, really, its great and so amusing and entertaining!

love jelly

Now they just need to add the sex and they'll be set. :D

Thanks for writing and sharing!