Reviews for Harry Potter & The Twisted Life
ThunderSphinx chapter 7 . 4/6
Flora Carrow? Hestia Carrow? Not canon. But if they were, they are several years younger than Harry.

Tracey Davis is a half-blood, not a pureblood.

*sigh* Poor Hermione

There's no freaking way that the Sorting Hat would ever put a muggleborn in Slytherin. It would be *FAR* too dangerous!
ThunderSphinx chapter 8 . 4/6
Conjured roosters aren't real so they would have absolutely no effect on a basilisk. And damn, why did u skip so much of Harry's tine at Hogwarts?

Please update soon please
hogwartsfan1 chapter 8 . 4/26/2016
HP and the twisted life . I am enjoying the story and hope you will continue with it.
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I never flame. I always write if I enjoy a story
rhizz17 chapter 8 . 11/29/2015
update please
Guest chapter 2 . 3/1/2015
Dude... Not cool, not cool at all.
FunnyDs1 chapter 8 . 12/21/2014
please update soon
saturnblue chapter 1 . 8/11/2014
Lily is really stupid what kind of parent is she to willing to forsaken her son on the order of someone who is not related by blood. He may be her once headmaster and head of the order she is in it doesn't mean he had the right to order her or tell her or persuade her to get rid of one of her child for the greater good. She seriously have no brain and think things through instead she rather take the easy way out by following the word of some old fool for his schemes. Are James and lily so hungry for fame that they willing to abandon all their children no matter what they may thought of the matter to powerful people's wills? Abandon their first heir on the wills of the so called leader of the light Albus Dumbledore, and perhaps will treat their second son as a prize to be won while spoil without much needed discipline and push him to the wills of many without much protection. They are willing to sacrifice all their children for the so called greater good. Are they happy to be doing this or will they forever regret their decision. Lily is stupid to name of their child of the one who supposed survived without a hitch as the boy-who-lived. She didn't even witness the so called crime scene with her haste of choosing upon sight will only be the down fall of the wizard world and break her once happy family apart if it's not already on it's to be broken.

James is stupid to believe lily without even check out the scene the same as with everyone else. There is two children and any one of them could be the one that survived the killing curse. Why not treat them as equal and live secluded some where to protect their family and not let others no matter how powerful they may be to interfere with their raising of the children and what should they do with said children. I think that type of family will be smarter and stronger to deal with the danger from all sides. Their children will learn from the parents to heed their warnings and would not fall victim to the traps/manipulation of other people. James and Lily are being manipulated and they don't even know it. Sorry for the rant but to see these type of behavior really makes me mad at these stupid people's actions or inaction for that matter. I have read a lot of stories with these type of theme it never gets old but it can have many different story lines or endings. So far I only see one that have a strong family unite as one that treated everyone equally and not let others no matter friend or foe to interfere how they raise their kids. It's good to see young baby harry able to be adopted by someone who will taken good care of him and not be left to her sister's place to be abused.

How can other lily stories that willing to abandon her own child to her sisters and would naively believe her own sister that would rather have nothing to do with her and her children willing to accept her abandoned ones. If her sister was a bigger person perhaps she will treated the one she threw away way better than lily and secure a loyalty toward their family the muggle one instead of toward the magical one. But in reality lily's sister is not that type of person and she would treat lily's threw away much worst than lily would expected. And lily would get mad and think her sister shouldn't when she knew deep inside she knowingly and willingly let this happen no matter what she may believe otherwise.

This is a good twist for Harry and he is able to live a more happier life without much obligation from the fame seeking fools or be manipulated by others who let power over their head. Besides how did people able to figure out how the child will be turning out just because one may be famous while the others not. Just because some might turned into that percentage doesn't mean EVERYONE will turn into jealous fiends that will be power hungry. With good discipline and acknowledge of the two children while not spoiling rotten with only one child and leave the other to rot will not cause that scenario. They may be new parents but WHY listen to someone who NEVER had CHILDREN to begin with about being danger to another child for being treated different than the other will cause issues to begin with. He may be a headmaster but the way he deal with the students left much to be desired and he never had children of his own to know what may or may not happen. He have no experience in the parental sense of duty only the broader version of it. He never did a good job on his broader subjects and what may u think he would know just because he may have seen or have a hand in by inaction of only ONE person who turned out to be Voldemort, it doesn't mean seeing ONLY ONE person turned into darkness and evil will mean EVERYONE will BECOME that because of maltreatment. It also doesn't mean one experience turned into expert of how children may turned out due to certain things.

Dumbledore probably want to control the boy who lived and control the potters by sprouting mad suggestions that the Potters in puppet strings willing to do as suggested without much complain. He is the one who turned away a lot of students and may have pushed them into darkness by not discipline the children under his care correctly or by inaction when he sees the truth. willing to manipulate things toward his control or believe that it's all a misunderstanding where children is just children and they couldn't be cruel to each other just a friendly rivalry that mentality only proven fatal in the end.
Guest chapter 8 . 2/14/2014
Skyeward MusicLover chapter 8 . 1/19/2014
great chapter. plse update the story
Greddb12 chapter 8 . 1/14/2014
If they told everyone that Harry was the son of isobells long lost sister, then since isobell was part of the dieting Dawn family, shouldn't they put Dawn at the end of his last name to make it more belivAble?
Blitzstrahl chapter 8 . 9/29/2013
Eh, Harry's raised by purebloods and still doesnt know he can claim the basilisk corpse by right of conquest?
Blitzstrahl chapter 5 . 9/29/2013
A Tidbit about Pure Blood lore in Harry Potter
3 generations of pure bloods makes you a common house.
7 makes your house noble.
13 you gain ancient status.
17 and your a The Most Ancient and Noble House Of [insert family name here]
17 generations is just more prestige for your house, and consider the 150 year life spans of magical's it takes a good while to get there. There are only about 12-15 Noble and Ancient blood lines left by 1998 out of the 50 wizengamont seats. Most notable are the Black's who go extinct with Sirius, and the Bones who are declared extinct when Susan Bones marries. Also a factoid people look over is despite the Malfoy wealth Lucius dosn't have a wizengamont seat his french heritage bars him his influence comes from his bribery. and naturally being aligned with the dark family's who follow his example. the 3,7 comes from magical society's belief in arthimancy
7 horcruxs, Percy and Ginny being the strongest magical combatants in there family's. Ginny proves her worth in the DoM battle as a example all she gets is a sprang ankle.
shadow7002 chapter 8 . 8/30/2013
is this going to be updated it is really good
ibterismith50 chapter 8 . 8/2/2013
Hope I get to read more. Thanks
kkrar00 chapter 8 . 6/30/2013
well this is awesome! one of the best WBWL i read!
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