|Reviews for Truth and Consequence|
| Guest chapter 12 . 3/2
i am completly fine with the grammer of the children and the house elves. I am only sixteen but i baby sit this little demon child:) and she talks like that and she lisps with words like things she wont add a s to things or she'll make add a s when she doesn't. It iritates me but than i thing she is only a little girl. But i think that the little kid and the house elves speaking is cool and it gives readers for of an imagination of the character.
| Guest chapter 24 . 1/27
| Guest chapter 24 . 12/30/2013
Why not lillian it is a version lily like he wanted
| Guest chapter 33 . 10/7/2013
just checking you said vince was married to astoria, yet in this chapter you mention daphne her sister... a typo or...
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
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| Shoetsu Otaku chapter 31 . 7/17/2013
Dear good author, please excuse my rant... (censored for cursing)
HARRY JAMES POTTER, HOW IN THE HELL CAN YOU BE SO FRICKING DENSE! BY GOD! WOULDN'T NORMAL HUMAN BEINGS AT LEAST TALK TO THEIR LOVER?! IS THERE SOMETHING MENTALLY WRONG WITH YOU!?
I'm sorry, this is just so angsty! I do love the story...
| jk chapter 34 . 7/3/2013
vince is married to Astoria and daphnie (who you said is dead)... there were a few words that were spelt wrong. but I really liked the story. it was a good read.
| Gabrielle chapter 17 . 5/28/2013
hehehe im in the story! xx
| Guest chapter 9 . 5/19/2013
I was reading it, but than the drama became to much. I don't feel like crying in this moment of my life, so I quit. It's excelent, nothing regarding the quality, I just fear the unavoidable tears. Maybe in the future I'll finish it.
| Carla Balsinha chapter 34 . 5/16/2013
Dear Loylal,let me tell you,this story it was one of the wonderful stories that I already red of this two...
Thank godness,exist fanfiction,to make us imagine our favourite caracters to have happy endings,and I love stories with marvellous finals...
Let me thank you for you share your words with all of us...
I Will take a look of your others stories...
| ob1292 chapter 34 . 2/26/2013
| Gracealma chapter 34 . 2/18/2013
Lovely story. I do like to bash Dumbles and Ginny.
| Bronkwin2 chapter 12 . 12/28/2012
This story is amazing so far and I can't wait to get to the end which is surprising for me as I am no longer a Drarry fan. I would just like to point out a possible spelling error that of 'dower' I'm unsure weather you meant to write 'dowry' so I thought it only polite to point it out as I would wish for someone to do the same for me.
| RedStalkingDeath chapter 12 . 10/31/2012
Just wanted to point something out: going into labor two weeks early is not much - both my younger brother and I were born three weeks early, there were no complications and we were perfectly fine. It's actually quite normal. I'm not saying there can't be problems, but you made it sound like they were born way to early.
Okay, enough of my "complaining", I'm actually enjoying the story immensely, and I'll go back to read more of it now :) Keep up the good work! ;D
| Kuramaworshiper chapter 34 . 10/3/2012