|Reviews for Servant to Darkness|
| jkflsfn22 chapter 2 . 11/9/2010
yay a second chapter already! i love the plot so much but please let me help you with your grammer! i beta read and for such a brilliant story, i am willing to help you as much as i can if you would like me to!
please write more soon!
| jkflsfn22 chapter 1 . 10/30/2010
I'm hooked! My god it's so good! Please write more as soon as possible!
| twilightwrites chapter 1 . 10/22/2010
This seems like a very interesting plot; however, the grammatical and spelling mistakes make it very hard to read. Also, when using dialogue, it is usually best to put it into a new paragraph, as to make it easier on the reader. But, like I said, it's a really interesting story nonetheless. Keep writing!