|Reviews for Trapped In a Locker|
| rugphan chapter 1 . 5/13
WARNING! SLIGHT SPOILERS! DON'T READ IF YOU DON'T WANT THE STORY SPOILED FOR YOU IN ANY WAY! :)
That was really cute! :) I love the fact the point where Arnold was kissing Helga, and he was thinking, 'Oh my gosh! I love you!' just before they stopped. Then he just went on like nothing happened afterward, and then I was thinking, 'Arnold! Stop! You're making me feel hopeful, only to leave me shouting in my head 'But you just said you loved her!''. XD I also enjoyed the fact that Helga still can never seem to catch a break. I mean, just when she's about to leave the locker, so they could both go back to 'not liking' each other, she realizes she just trapped them inside the locker. It makes me think of those episodes where Helga nearly spills her secret about her love for Arnold, and has to take drastic measures in order for him not to find out. Anyway, awesome story, and I look forward to reading more of your fanfics!
| DeepVoice'06 chapter 2 . 10/26/2014
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/22/2014
Decent, but too sappy... you know? More of what's on their minds, less "action". But overall, not bad! :)
| SquirrelandNight123 chapter 2 . 10/11/2014
This was great! I love your writing style!
| keep-me-posted chapter 2 . 9/18/2014
I am so head over heels in love with this story. Your writing style is perfect for these two, especially at the beginning of their unsure relationship, with all the stutterings and pauses.
| sallyskellington chapter 2 . 5/4/2014
That was amazing...im in tears..arnold and helga forever! 3
| serendipityrain711 chapter 1 . 3/6/2014
Omg that was sooooo gooood! I know you wrote this a long time ago but i just started reading fanfiction. The way you write is so perfect. You can picture every single thing they do and say its just better than watching it on tv. Hey arnold is one of my favourite tv shows and reading this very entertaining moment between these two just put a smile to my face. AxH forever!
| heyarnoldforeverandever chapter 1 . 1/29/2014
Really good story. I think you captured Helga's personality really well. Also I like how he said "kind of like little kisses." That was sweet and really funny. (:
| Diva180 chapter 2 . 12/30/2013
Almost all of your fanfics makes references and mentions the jungle movie, could you please consider making a real fic about it, not one of those lame summary-fics or postTJM because that's all I have been finding online lately, I mean a real detailed fic about the TJM, I really, really want to see how a writer with your spark can do with that plot.
PS: If you do consider making one, I say that for La Sombra's characters, a lot of the other fanfics makes him a cliché villain and make him want "La Corazon" because it has magical powers or something, I say that if you consider making a TJM fic, can you make La sombra into a more realistic villain like Frollo from HBoND, or Clayton from Tarzan, make him ruthless, dangerous and greedy and willing to kill without a second thought, and have his reason for wanting La Corazon be out of greed, like say the Corazon is really just a giant emerald worth a fortune and that's why he wants it, it's realistic and doesn't change he is a real, deadly villain.
Either way great fanfic as always :)
| Queen Kalana874 chapter 2 . 9/12/2013
Aw! This is just perfect! I can't get over how good of a writer you are! You don't forget about anything at all! Every sentence has a connection and repetition with another. It's like a perfect puzzle. :)
The story was cute and absolutely realistic in the Hey Arnold universe. Helga would totally trap Arnold in a locker and make out with him instead of pound him! Lol. I like that you explained their feelings and thoughts so well.
The one and only thing I would change is at the very end, where she says she loves him, but he doesn't say anything back.
As far as the rest of the story goes, it's so lovely! How do you manage to write so much with no mistakes!? I love it! Very nice!
| amielouisegarland17 chapter 2 . 5/24/2013
I loved it, it was so sweet best one yet
| iamnel chapter 2 . 4/2/2013
| DarkEnigma013 chapter 2 . 11/30/2012
Yay! I love your fics so much XD Re-read this one to make me feel better while I am sick - One of my favs!
| AmorFatiAhMi chapter 2 . 9/17/2012
The janitor closet scene, especially with the lights! Arnold and Helga snugging :)
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/1/2012
Jeez, sometimes i forget that they are 9 or 10 they act so much older