|Reviews for Pieces of a Story|
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/11/2012
Susan is kind of awesome
| Spookykat chapter 8 . 12/21/2010
Yeah...Sue being prim-and-propper. Like THAT will ever happen, with any incarnation of her.
And I have to say. I love the Susan/Matthias interaction!
And Packard is...not very likable. He's not even FUN or bad-ass like Puck is. He's just...slimey and entitled.
| Spookykat chapter 7 . 12/18/2010
I do not like Packard...not one bit.
And if he thinks he's going to try and "bridle" Susan, he's got another thing coming!
And Heeee! I love that Madeline sees something going on between her and Matthias! Wow, that'd be a dangerous conversation to have in that era!
| Spookykat chapter 6 . 12/18/2010
yeah, Mr. Simpson? Where DO your loyalties lie?
I LOVE the dynamic between Matthias and Susan. And Susan's last "stuff it" made me giggle!
And it'll be interesting to see what'll happen on the boat.
Can't wait to see where this goes!
| irishgirl01 chapter 5 . 11/24/2010
AHAHAHAHA. I hate Sam too XD
I'm having the hardest time trying to envision Sue Sylvester as an 18th century teen, but I love this story all the same.
| Spookykat chapter 5 . 11/16/2010
Sooooo...I officially love Matthias. And even pastlife!Sam is douchey...guess some things never change.
And Everard worries me just a little bit. But still, it'll be interesting to see how North Carolina pans out.
| Megan Potassium chapter 5 . 11/15/2010
I completely agree about Sam. The writers tried to hard to turn him into Puck during Puck's absence. Plus Sam/Quinn kind of makes me sick.
Great chapter though :)
P.S- Totally followed your twitter :P Your tweets make me laugh
| Rapp Fan chapter 5 . 11/14/2010
Oh, I hate Sam too. Bieber-man needs to get some different hair styles or a different color.
As to the chapter, it seemed a little slow. Obviously, the fact that they're preparing for a voyage adds to this, but something dastardly would move it along...say, a fight between Susan and a fellow crewmember, possibly a young dashing fellow crewmember? 'Tis your story, but the characters seem more like themselves in this one.
| WeAreTomorrow chapter 3 . 11/11/2010
Love the idea! Points for originality. Can't wait to read more.
| DJ-DizzyD chapter 2 . 11/5/2010
Even your pastlife!Gleeks are in character. This was a very interesting concept :)
| DJ-DizzyD chapter 1 . 11/5/2010
Sue's hilarious. And this plot...interesting.
| LuvMeSumGlee chapter 4 . 11/1/2010
This is quite fascinating. I love all your stories, and this is no exception. You're a fabulous writer, keep it up and update soon!
| Megan Potassium chapter 4 . 10/28/2010
Only you could slip a hair joke into a story like this.
It's amazing. Just saying :D
| 6464MiniDiceofRandomness chapter 3 . 10/24/2010
Mercedes' mind would be blown if she knew about this.
| My-Alphabet-Soup chapter 3 . 10/23/2010
You know what I love about this story? The Susan/Madeline dynamic. I think some people might think that this makes Susan not Sue-like at all, but I think it works well because you made it clear in the first chapter that Sue's current incarnation is her meanest yet. Keeping this in mind, you can still see Susan's rebellious nature, but it is somewhat more in check. I like this because it is subtle and something that only some people will get (not to say that many people won't, just that if people are looking for real writing and not just fluffy stuff or fantasy ideas). Plus the fact that you manage to do this equals many kudos for you because writing for Sue can be very difficult (this I have tried), and so I can only imagine how difficult it would be to keep *this* Sue in character (this I have never attempted as I would crash, burn and die horribly).
Sorry for the shortish review, but I have much study to attend to. Can't wait for more!