Reviews for The Moment I Can See It
1tinac chapter 1 . 10/23/2014
Oh ioved this
isacz chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
love it! wow so cute. great job.
Lady Dragona chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
This is an interesting look at the damage that parents can cause and the joy and life that true love can repair that damage.
maia smith chapter 1 . 11/15/2010
Adorable! This is such a sweet story! Well done.
cocoalvin chapter 1 . 11/11/2010
Wonderful. Truely Wonderful!
Firefly1989 chapter 1 . 11/4/2010
Beautiful :) loved it :)

Lucy
sasharose11 chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
That was quite a daydream. Here's hoping that the coffee date goes well. Great story.
TwilightMundi chapter 1 . 10/27/2010
Very sweet story. It's like that AT&T commercial (I think that's what it is) where that guy sees the woman on the train and their lives flash through his mind (but in reverse chronological order) and he changes his ticket so he can be on the same train she's on. Well done.
ICMezzo chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
What a sweet story. Delightful to read. Nice job! -ICMezzo
84gemstone chapter 1 . 10/23/2010
Oh my god it was all a day dream? i have to say that was the best dream ever i hope it come's true
ChefJayla chapter 1 . 10/22/2010
OMG it wasn't real? You've killed me :DEAD.

Nice story!
clairdeluneisgreat chapter 1 . 10/22/2010
amazing story.
bbbluez chapter 1 . 10/21/2010
Fantastic and a bit different! Can't wait to find out who the mystery author is!
urmistaken chapter 1 . 10/21/2010
Absolutely loved this. Very well written fic, I enjoyed reading your story very much.

"If Jasper's insecurity was that Edward wanted bigger things for his life, Edward's was that Jasper would find someone else." Loved how Jasper got Edward "here." They were so perfect for each other.

Thank you for writing this.
joayla chapter 1 . 10/21/2010
Great story!
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