Reviews for Seattle's Most
bornagoof chapter 6 . 1/1/2011
Passport, you need to prove that you're American, what kind of first date leads to that?

Great, chapter. No worries about the delay, I have two toddler siblings, and they get real rough. You still have a life, you can't update constantly.

I don't think I would like orange cake. I don't like the idea of mixing fruits and baked goods.
dreampills chapter 6 . 1/1/2011
lol. i think i would have gone a little crazy if bella just all of a sudden stopped talking to me. the time lapsed was a couple of hours. i would have conjured up multiple horror scenarios. haha

yea..favorite smell is really really weird. i love the smell of gasoline after it rains and during christmas time. LOL )
pillow912 chapter 5 . 12/26/2010
great chapters!
quinzy chapter 5 . 12/21/2010
still waiting for the next chap to come up...when will it be?
luvtwilightff chapter 5 . 12/15/2010
'SNIFF'...I am crying because I am all caught up!

I am loving your story, like I said, it is unique and refreshing!

Please update soon! I will be like a little kid on Christmas morning when I see an update in my box!

Great job!
luvtwilightff chapter 2 . 12/15/2010
Found this over on Twilighted, and was so happy to find many more chapters here!

This is unique, refreshing! I love how elusive Edward is being and him being a composer..HOT! Especially Bella's review of his work, just as Alice described it!

I love how he turned down Esme's dinner request for another setup, and I love Bella's personality in this story!

What a romantic, sending Roses to Bella! That brought a smile to my face!

Cant wait to catch up and see where these two go!
dreampills chapter 4 . 12/15/2010
your review count went from 39 to 40 back to 39. lol. my bad

the articles always comes up as some weird formatting on my comp. must just be me. still readable..just looks weird. lol

ohh..they totally have to do this formal date thing. you can't make jessica a liar right? "bella" did bid on the guy. haha

great job!
dreampills chapter 3 . 12/15/2010
someone once told me that while dating, lunch dates are a no no. would you consider these "meetings" lunch dates? hm..i'm not sure i believe in no lunch dates..i went on a lunch date and a guy, who ended up being my fiancée. ) so..crossing my fingers that a lunch date will lead to something good. hehe
dreampills chapter 2 . 12/15/2010
wasn't that sweet of edward to send flowers? couldn't do an interview, but send a girl some rose right? couldn't even be a more innocent type of flower? lol. its his subconscious coming out
dreampills chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
found the story on twilighted, but i really hate reading anything on there if its also on ff. much more phone friendly. lol

hm..will bella be having any interactions ;) with the other bachelors?
dreampills chapter 5 . 12/15/2010
LOL this story is too funny. i love the formatting with the emails/texts/and articles. ) makes their interactions much more fun to read!
vpg26 chapter 5 . 12/15/2010
Really enjoying your story; can't wait for next chapters.
bebe86 chapter 5 . 12/15/2010
So they made the gossip pages...nice touch.

Love to read about the progression of their relationship. They are both already hooked.

Great job so far, I really like this story, and I hope that more people find this little gem.

bebe86 chapter 4 . 12/15/2010
Another great chapter. I'm really enjoying this story.

Glad to see that they are figuring out an attraction of won't be happy though when she figures out that she is the elusive Ms Dwyer...
bebe86 chapter 3 . 12/15/2010
A whole chapter full of emails, IM's etc, thought I would get confused but it flows nicely and reads easily.

Edward sounds too good to be fact, all of the bachelors are quite the catch!

Great chapter.
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