Reviews for Marion's Choice
smithsbabe65 chapter 2 . 3/21/2011
Oh I like this...

Marion's voice has been captured perfectly. It comes across loud and clear albeit with a skewed bent on things thus making her a not-so credible narrator.

These glimpses she sees, these nightmarish visions...I have a feeling those haunting images are REAL.

However, the choice she made of bringing the money back, Cassidy's propostion and the visit to his room are the dream, the product of regret and wishful thinking as she dies horribly in that shower in cabin number one.

That's the twist, isn't it? A masterful one if I do say so myself. Well done.

I see you haven't updated in awhile and that's a shame because this story is intriguing. I hope you'll continue this one day.


And don't think I missed Norman's appearence in her dream as the "tall, lanky" busboy.
ChocolateChipCookie29 chapter 2 . 3/18/2011
Mysterious, I like it. :) Please continue.