|Reviews for Noriko: The Beginning|
| guest chapter 5 . 10/28/2016
Well if you want feedback... I think this story is full of horrible cliches and kind of wish you did a time skip. I normally love fem!Naruto stories but this one doesn't even really seem to have Naruto in it. You used the overused kunai explanation and now you got a female NICE Kyuubi (Kurama is full of malice and somehow him being anything other than male seems horribly wrong). I don't like your OC and I miss the real Naruto. I do however like your writing style since this was pretty much easy for me to read just sadly wasn't that interesting for me. The plot just doesn't appeal to me.
| christian chapter 15 . 8/9/2016
daikyuu yuki hyouden bad pun with the solidly s ranked part but good story so far
| Person chapter 9 . 7/10/2016
This Is A Awesome Chapter
| kitttycat chapter 12 . 5/16/2016
when iniri said "they are going to die" i imagined naruto going all foxy on him and saying" shut the F up cunt!"
| A Vixen Kitsune - Oh Shit chapter 15 . 11/25/2015
Kakashi uses chidori to try and kill Zabuza in the anime
| briskd chapter 5 . 9/21/2015
Great chapter! Even though I'm late you still deserve it!
| CartoonKing chapter 2 . 9/12/2015
Maybe something interesting to read... I have a lot of stories I have forgotten to favor on here and yours is one of them.
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/13/2015
Sorry I updated and fixed my ideas
I have suggestions for story than I have suggestion on what the rest of tails she gains should be and I think it would be cool if she had more than 10 tails. Also I think tailed beast and kitsunes should be immortal and unkillable and that zabuza and haku no all about the 9 tailed and that nauto can give immortality and gives it to those she cares about and is killable until she gets all of her tails and I think that after the chunining exams, she always stay in her kitsune form. Also I think that the nine tails shouldn't lose her tails and goes free after naruto has all her tail and even stays with naruto for all eternity and I also think that there should a sequal and be 10 thousand years time skips were new generation face a threat that could destroy the world and new adventure, also I think nauto, the nine tails and those she made immortal should play a big part in the sequel.
Also I think it would be cool if tsuande removed all the scar when they retrieve her to be hokage, also I think the sarutobi should live just step down
Tail 6: Should be Nature, Plants and Animals
Tail 7: Should be Chakra and Nature Energy
Tail 8: Should be Humanity
Tail 9 Should be Rebirth and Healing
Tail 10: Should be Gravity
Tail 11: Should be Force, Push and Pull
Tail 12: Should be Darkness, Shadows and Night
Tail 13: Should be Light and Day
Tail 14: Should be Death
Tail 15: Should be Life
Tail 16: Should be Energy
Tail 17: Should be Matter
Tail 18: Should be Yang
Tail 19: should be Yin
Tail 20: Should be Creation
Tail 21: Should be Destruction
Tail 22: Should be Space
Tail 23: Should be Time
Tail 24: Should be Reality
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/17/2015
Also if you continue the origanal story than I have suggestion on what the rest of tails she gains should be and I think it would be cool if had more than 10 tails. Also I think tailed beast and kitsunes should be immortal and unkillable and that zabuza and haku no all about the 9 tailed and that nauto can give immortality and is killable until she gets all of her tails and I think that after the chunining exams, she always stay in her kitsune form. Also I think that the nine tails dosen't lose her tails and goes free after naruto has all her tail and even stays with naruto for all eternity and I also think that there should a sequal and A be 10 thousand years time skips were new generation face a threat that could destroy the world and new adventure, also I think nauto, the nine tails and those she made immortal play a big part in the sequel.
Tail 6: Sould be Lava and Wood
Tail 7: Should be Ice and Blood
Tail 8: Should be Heat and Plasma
Tail 9: Should be Nature
Tail 10: Should be Gravity and Force
Tail 11: Should be Light and Darkness
Tail 12: Should be Life and Death
Tail 13: Should be Matter and Energy
Tail 14: Should be Space and Time
Tail 15: Should be Magic and Illusions
Tail 16: Should be chakra and Humaity
| Guest chapter 19 . 5/17/2015
I don't like the rewritte it's born and doesn't keep me intested lit the original story, so if can please start the original again or let some one adopt it.
P.S plus I love all the pounding action and surprises and that she not coddled or a gufy idiot. Also I think you shoud shange it so that her team, sensi and the shinobi now all about stuff that has happed with the nine tale foxe, also I love the fact that she can make new Justus and when they meet tsunade I think she should have all her scars healed by tsunade
| Guest chapter 19 . 3/11/2015
Look I love you. You are an amazing author an I would do anything for you. But you have to update man! Come on! Its been years! I love this story dearly and i would pay to see the end of it! Pleeaaasee continue this story! Te rewrite is good but I think it is best if you finish the original first. Again, please! Im not trying to pressure you but at least say something like "im sorry but im not writting anymore" or "I have been very busy and it will take while for me to update again" Anything! If you are updating I will wait. But please don't make me wait for nothing.
| Guest chapter 7 . 2/22/2015
WHYYY? WHY DID YOU HAVE TO RUIN THIS GOOD PLOT!
I can accept that your OC is replacing Naruto in all of his blondness glory and for Heaven's sake, no one can use theraphy-no-jutsu slash talk-no-jutsu as best as Naruto
I can accept that she became Kurama's heir in all of his awesomeness and fluffyiness. And the fact that she manage to gain a low Anbu strength in the same year that she found out about Kurama.
But dammit I can only accept so much until you have to make FAHKING SHIKAMARU AND FAHKING DUCKBUTT slash SASUKE FALL FOR HER GODDAMNIT!
AND THE FACT THAT IT WAS ALL GOING SO WELL, UNTIL YOU RUIN SUCH BEAUTIFUL WRITING! WHY?
FOR HEAVEN'S SAKE, WHY?!
JASHINDAMNIT! EXPLAIN YOURSELF!
I can't even read this anymore...
This like like the ultimatum of EVERY Naruto Fanfiction. Go fahkinh delete or remake this abomination. I'm begging you.
| ScbaStv chapter 19 . 10/19/2014
Incredible story. I'm sorry to see it completed here, but am certainly excited to pick up the rewrite (as soon as it gets a little bit farther along in length). I don't think I've seen a scenario where the Forest of Death/the central tower acted as the home. I was really impressed with the description and the detail put into the layout of different floors contained within.
| Maa Maa chapter 12 . 10/18/2014
Noriko can make at least 300 clones, not 50
| Midoriori chapter 1 . 10/10/2014
Is naruto dead in this story? I don't know if that 'harsh laugh' meant the boy died.