Reviews for The Death of Jiraiya and the Rise of Minato
Lobasola chapter 1 . 12/14/2013
Has someone adopted this story alreaduly? If not I would love to adopt it
Lady Nature chapter 2 . 7/13/2013
could you alert us if/when someone adopts this story?
tangune chapter 2 . 8/11/2012
ok i love the story i would like to give it a try to do a chapter
Noxy the Proxy chapter 2 . 7/5/2012
...It was so good at the beginning!
Polaris chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
No offense but please go back to writing d gray man. It's annoying when writers drop their stories.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/8/2011
Guest chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
anonymous chapter 1 . 8/24/2011
AHHHH! why do the stories with good plots and so much potential never get written! this is sooo good! continue this story! don't leave us hanging
alicia chapter 1 . 5/18/2011
i love this please write more! UPDATE
Guest chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
Could you get someone else to do a naru/saku version? cause I'd like to read both verions.
alicia chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
i love this please write more! UPDATE
draconisimperio chapter 1 . 2/8/2011
Luvved this story please make make it into a chapter story
alicia chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
write more.
Assassin.Lin chapter 1 . 1/6/2011
this is pretty good! it puts a nice twist on the usual stories after jiraiya's death. i think you should totally make this into a story.
Anguished-Shino chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
Absolutely LOVED IT! I felt a little disappointed/unsatisfied at the ending and would be very interested to see this develop into a more lengthy story.
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