Reviews for Who you are shines through
Gabs chapter 24 . 9/18/2014
That was such a wonderful ride! I stayed up well past what I should've, but boy I don't regret a minute of it. Tomorrow I will be half-zombie but full on happy fangirl because of you :)
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 24 . 9/5/2014
An ending marking the beginning. An excellent idea!
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 23 . 9/5/2014
The thing I loved most about this chapter was the details about Bill's time in Egypt.
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 22 . 9/5/2014
Brilliant!
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 21 . 9/5/2014
I'm really glad you put in the french (not to mention the translations).
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 20 . 9/5/2014
Another wonderful piece of writing.
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 19 . 9/5/2014
The opening is this chapter was v. good.
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 18 . 9/5/2014
I enjoyed seeing Bill interact with his brothers. Could you work more family moments into the story please?
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 17 . 9/5/2014
That last paragraph was just right.
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 16 . 9/5/2014
That was unexpected. However, I expected you writing to be this good; you write well consistently.
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 15 . 9/5/2014
That dream... it could have been real!
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 14 . 9/5/2014
This was a beautiful chapter.
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 13 . 9/5/2014
I like the way you work the occasional French word/phrase into the dialogue.
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 12 . 9/5/2014
Aww! This was so good :)
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 11 . 9/5/2014
I thought the ending was just perfect.
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