|Reviews for Who you are shines through|
| Maya-nii chapter 24 . 11/19/2016
Ohhh I was so hoping this would be complete. I can't stand cliffhangers! Haha. But this is a brilliant story. I just got done with Bad Mum's Bill/Fleur story and I've been craving for more.
I enjoy the in-depth characterizations here. Fleur's insecurity was written very well and fit her personality well; Bill's was also on point. I imagine, as the eldest, he does feel a lot of burden of responsibilities. I hope you'll be able to continue this story soon or even years from now because the HP world needs more amazing written works for canon couples like Bill/Fleur.
| rzmrfst chapter 1 . 1/10/2016
IS IT WEIRD THAT I'M STILL WAITING LOL it's been years and i've been following this story for ages omg. This will still be one of my most favorite stories ever, though. Very well written, their relationship never really felt forced, and its written the way it gives the reader enough space for imagination. Kudos! I love you, Safekeeping. You're like one of the best writers in my list. Even though this story will never probably finish :'(
| First Movement chapter 24 . 7/4/2015
Noooooooo! Uuugh, just when she join the Order. Anyway, really sad that this story is go unfinished, and hope someday you'll be back to this story and finish it. Really, really good job though, nice work!
| First Movement chapter 22 . 7/3/2015
Whoaaa, this story is so well written! The gap filling of their relationship, and what happen in between, how the things that happened arround them have effect on their decision and way of thinking... A
| Gabs chapter 24 . 9/18/2014
That was such a wonderful ride! I stayed up well past what I should've, but boy I don't regret a minute of it. Tomorrow I will be half-zombie but full on happy fangirl because of you :)
| PixiePatronus13675 chapter 24 . 9/5/2014
An ending marking the beginning. An excellent idea!
| PixiePatronus13675 chapter 23 . 9/5/2014
The thing I loved most about this chapter was the details about Bill's time in Egypt.
| PixiePatronus13675 chapter 22 . 9/5/2014
| PixiePatronus13675 chapter 21 . 9/5/2014
I'm really glad you put in the french (not to mention the translations).
| PixiePatronus13675 chapter 20 . 9/5/2014
Another wonderful piece of writing.
| PixiePatronus13675 chapter 19 . 9/5/2014
The opening is this chapter was v. good.
| PixiePatronus13675 chapter 18 . 9/5/2014
I enjoyed seeing Bill interact with his brothers. Could you work more family moments into the story please?
| PixiePatronus13675 chapter 17 . 9/5/2014
That last paragraph was just right.
| PixiePatronus13675 chapter 16 . 9/5/2014
That was unexpected. However, I expected you writing to be this good; you write well consistently.
| PixiePatronus13675 chapter 15 . 9/5/2014
That dream... it could have been real!