Reviews for Who you are shines through
First Movement chapter 24 . 7/4
Noooooooo! Uuugh, just when she join the Order. Anyway, really sad that this story is go unfinished, and hope someday you'll be back to this story and finish it. Really, really good job though, nice work!
First Movement chapter 22 . 7/3
Whoaaa, this story is so well written! The gap filling of their relationship, and what happen in between, how the things that happened arround them have effect on their decision and way of thinking... A
Gabs chapter 24 . 9/18/2014
That was such a wonderful ride! I stayed up well past what I should've, but boy I don't regret a minute of it. Tomorrow I will be half-zombie but full on happy fangirl because of you :)
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 24 . 9/5/2014
An ending marking the beginning. An excellent idea!
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 23 . 9/5/2014
The thing I loved most about this chapter was the details about Bill's time in Egypt.
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 22 . 9/5/2014
Brilliant!
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 21 . 9/5/2014
I'm really glad you put in the french (not to mention the translations).
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 20 . 9/5/2014
Another wonderful piece of writing.
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 19 . 9/5/2014
The opening is this chapter was v. good.
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 18 . 9/5/2014
I enjoyed seeing Bill interact with his brothers. Could you work more family moments into the story please?
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 17 . 9/5/2014
That last paragraph was just right.
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 16 . 9/5/2014
That was unexpected. However, I expected you writing to be this good; you write well consistently.
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 15 . 9/5/2014
That dream... it could have been real!
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 14 . 9/5/2014
This was a beautiful chapter.
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 13 . 9/5/2014
I like the way you work the occasional French word/phrase into the dialogue.
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